Friday, July 26, 2024

Book Review: Suyi Davies Okungbowa’s Lost Ark Dreaming

A novella that effortlessly slides from science fiction to elements of fantasy and mythology and allegory to tell a moderate near future story set off the coast of Nigeria.


Yekini has a problem. She is a midder, working and living on the middle levels of the Pinnacle, the last of the Fingers, the last of an ark/arcology built off of the Nigerian coast. She has by luck and dint of effort escaped her lower class origins. Or so she has thought, until an assignment sends her with the higher class administrator Ngozi down undersea, to the levels of the Pinnacle underneath the waves. There Ngozi and Yekini will confront a threat to the Pinnacle itself, a threat from outside the tower, in the deep waters that surround this last bastion of humanity. Something called the Children...

So one finds the narrative in Suyi Davies Okungbowa’s Lost Ark Dreaming.

Let me start, atypically, with a place I don’t normally focus first, but for this novella, I will. Let’s look at the language and the writing. The story is a mixture of three points of view from our main characters, interspersed with other material, including pieces that are clearly myth and allegory as well as “press releases” and news showing, in flashes a bit of the world before the world of the Pinnacle. Not only are the allegorical pieces well written and evocative, the entire novella rests on the strength of the line by line writing of the author, especially in these sections, short and sharp. Okungbowa is particularly good at making us feel, be it the apprehension of investigating the undersea levels, the conflicts and relationships between our protagonists, divided and yet united by being an Upper, a Midder and a Lower Level denizen. The novella’s voices and its shifting of tense and mood from section to section, from point of view to point of view to the interludes, is as smooth as a well honed manual transmission in an automobile.

I am no stranger to his work, and like the previous efforts I’ve read, reading the first two novels of the Nameless Republic [review here at Skiffy and Fanty]. Those two novels were very definitely a critique of imperial power and the structures of power, blending in myth and magic along with that criticism. So it is here, too. The author is very much criticizing unjust power structures, and the structures that maintain that power and what that does to people and to society as a whole.

Here, however, the author is starting with a arcology/ark science fictional setting rather than high epic fantasy, but the themes and resonances are familiar. The result of starting with a science fictional setting and weaving in allegory, myth and magic, is that the novella has a feel similar to books like Nnedi Okorafor’s Lagoon (which is also set in the same region), or for those who like their science fiction in a cinema mode, Snowpiercer.

Snowpiercer works particularly well, because of the stratification. Like Snowpiercer, we have a constricted, and restricted space for, seemingly, the last of humanity. To wit, there is not even the hint of anyone existing outside of the ark, if they do, they’re not reachable and they are not coming. Plus the “second deluge” maps to the great freeze in Snowpiercer being a grand disaster, isolating the remnants of humanity to one structure. In addition, the world of the Pinnacle is literally stratified. The higher you live and work in the tower, the better off you invariably are. Those who live at the top rule and control everything. Those who live in the submerged levels, live in a world where they never see the sun or the sky. In between are the midders, the ones like Yekini who actually keep the Pinnacle functioning and working. Even the midders are under a lot of restrictions and problems. The opening of the novel is Yekini rushing to work hoping she will not be late, and later in the novel, we get notes about the midders not being really allowed to wander outside of commuting to work. So the political and social allegory is definitely strong and resonant, and part of the point of the novel.

Like Snowpiercer, the setting is evocative and memorable even if it probably does not hold up to strong “hard science fiction” scrutiny as a viable and complete ecosystem. A remnant of humanity stuck in a single building poking out of the ocean? The logistical problems of keeping this population alive are as insurmountable as the ones in Snowpiercer, but the novella successfully manages to deflect the reader thinking about that until well after the novella is done. And, honestly, a rigorous setting would be in the end be beside the point. This is not a novella about the realpolitik logistics of how an ark like this would work, it is about story, and people in that arcology and the story of these three characters and their pivotal roles in that story.

The author keeps the novella ticking along with a variety of the aforementioned interludes interspersed with the action of Yekini, Ngozi and Tuoyo (a lower level head of safety that joins the two and thus gives us a point of view character from each section of the Pinnacle). Some of these interludes are press releases from the time before the Deluges, describing the dreams and ambitions of the constructors, and their callousness in their construction of the Fingers. Other interludes show us some more items from the archives show an upper-level point of view of the history of episodes of the Pinnacle.

And then there’s something else, and here we fully go into allegory and myth. The pieces are written like fragments of story, or sometimes poetry, or song. Who and where they are coming from, and how they are being transmitted to the reader is something that is not completely clear, but it’s a parallel conversation that the text is having with the reader.

Ultimately, this is where the novella comes to its full flower. The story of Yekini,Tuoyo and Ngozi is in the end a conversation with the other residents of the tower, a conversation with the reader, an engagement and an offer of engagement with the reader. It’s a novella about *communication* and the power of communication between the human and the...well, that would be telling, wouldn’t it? There is a lot to the plotting that I would dare not spoil and it does forestall discussing some details of the novella in specific without giving them away. But there is definite intimacy to this story, like if a grandparent were telling you this story as a legend or a myth. It is a novella that again and again reinforces the power and centrality of story as something that helps define who and what you are.

In a real way, then, treading very carefully so as not to spoil the revelation for a reader, Lost Ark Dreaming is the story of how the Pinnacle learned to incorporate new stories within itself, to help change and redefine what it is. The ending is very open ended and unclear, it is best imagined rather than set down explicitly. The author gives you the world and the story, and it is for the reader to ultimately decide what it means and what will become of this new story. It’s an intimate and powerful trust that the author places in the reader, here, in the novella.

In the end, Lost Ark Dreaming is a potent and heady mixture of science fiction, myth, allegory and the power of story and communication, in a short and intense novella format.

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Highlights:

  • Strong and evocative use of language

  • Powerful allegory and use of myth and story 

  • Well evoked setting

Reference: Okungbowa, Suyi Davies  Lost Ark Dreaming  [Tordotcom, 2024]

POSTED BY: Paul Weimer. Ubiquitous in Shadow, but I’m just this guy, you know? @princejvstin.

Thursday, July 25, 2024

The Ignyte Award Shortlist 2024 - Selected Discussions

 

The Ignyte Awards have just announced their much anticipated 2024 shortlist, and it is, as ever, a fantastic set of nominees (not that we're biased from last year or anything). There's a huge amount to dig into here, but I'm going to focus on the categories where I've read some or all of the finalists, and so feel like I have something significant to say - this is no shade on the rest, and I have no doubt they're all brilliant, but as someone who doesn't read, for example, middle grade, I'm not sure my uninformed opinion helps anyone.

If you're interested in the full shortlist, you can of course find it here.

But for now, here are the run downs in some selected categories, along with some initial thoughts:

First up, we have Outstanding Novel: Adult

Honestly, this is just an out and out banger of a shortlist. At this point in the awards season, it would be weirder to see a novel shortlist without Vajra Chandrasekera's (excellent) The Saint of Bright Doors, about which many words have already been said across the internet (and previously here by Adri). It's great. This is, I believe, its eighth nomination.

Of the rest, I have read both To Shape a Dragon's Breath, which is a fantastic and fresh approach to the classic magical school trope, with some wonderful characters and captivating worldbuilding, and The Water Outlaws (Paul's has review here), which feels like a pure distillation of a martial arts film into a book, with a clear love on the page for the intricacies of action sequence and the physical. Both are books with a very clear individuality to their storytelling - you could open a page and immediately know it wasn't any other book - and those distinct voices to the prose make both stand out in the memory.

For the remaining two, though I have not read We Are The Crisis (Phoebe's review here) , I have read No Gods, No Monsters (Adri's review here), to which it is the sequel. If it is anything like as good as its predecessor? Well, there's a reason I have just now gone and ordered a copy. No Gods, No Monsters was utterly gripping, beautifully structured and just generally captivating the whole way through as it explores a vividly realised take on an urban fantasy world where magical creatures exist, in all the complexity that would truly mean, alongside some much more real-world concerns. Which leaves Shigidi and the Brass Head of Obalufon by Wole Talabi. This one I have not read at all, but the plot - a nightmare god and a sort-of succubus are tasked with one last job to allow them to leave the Orisha Spirit Company... the catch? It's stealing back an artefact from the British Museum - is instantly interesting. If it's anything like his previous short story, "A Dream of Electric Mothers", the prose will be pretty top tier too.

On the whole, this is a really strong and varied shortlist, and one I'm going to really struggle voting in.

Next up, Outstanding Novella

For speculative works ranging from 17,500-39,999 words

The first thing that strikes me about this shortlist is that two of my favourite small presses are getting some rep - Off-Time Jive by A.Z. Louise is one of Neon Hemlock's 2023 offering, and we've got two entries from Stelliform. Green Fuse Burning by Tiffany Morris got a review in our novella project earlier this year from Phoebe, and they likewise covered Sordidez by E.G. Condé back last September. Both, quite rightly, glowing reviews for fundamentally interesting novellas, both of which tackle climate change, colonisation and family in ways that really grab the heart as well as the mind.

While I've not read Off-Time Jive yet, in my experience so far, Neon Hemlock simply do not miss, and this has been sat in my queue to read for a while now - the combination of magic, detectives and yearning promised here are hard to resist.

Which leaves us with the two Tordotcom offerings. Tor, in their various forms, have been dominating the novella ballots in awards across the board, and while it's great to see their hegemony being broken a little, I am also forced to admit that there's a reason they've been raking them in - they really do put out some good stuff.

The Lies of the Ajungo by Moses Ose Utomi manages to capture the mythical tone of an authentic fable, without compromising the human heart at the centre of the story. I absolutely consumed it in reading, and was really struck by how well it tackled its themes of empire, propaganda and control in so small a space.

The Mimicking of Known Successes by Malka Older, by contrast, was an absolute snack of a book - the sort of thing that soothes the soul and warms the heart, and can be consumed in a single, hungry sitting. A Holmesian murder mystery with a gentle, tentative and touching romance as two old friends rekindle their relationship, it could not be tonally further from the others, and yet no less compelling for it.

And onto Outstanding Novelette

for speculative works ranging from 7,500-17,499 words

Short fiction is great for the space it has to play around with ideas, contexts and perspectives, and so I'm really glad to see Renan Bernado's A Short Biography of a Conscious Chair here, because it's exactly the sort of cool, strange thing I love to see recognised on shortlists.

It's also a place to let ideas and settings sing, without the need to be tied too tightly to a full-length plot, and its in that creation of a fully realised backdrop that Imagine: Purple-Haired Girl Shooting Down the Moon really sings - in brief strokes and deftness showing us a corner of a world that stands in for the whole.

Or maybe it's a space to play out emotion, as C L Polk does in Ivy, Angelica, Bay, weaving together themes of family, legacy and personhood to create something that touches the heart and moves the feelings in the life of a neighbourhood witch in the aftermath of the death of her mother, finding a small girl who may go on to be her daughter and successor.

In those three, we get a real feeling for the span of what novelettes can do, and so I can only imagine the remaining two on the shortlist, Spell for Grief and Longing by Eboni J. Dunbar and Zhuangzi’s Dream by Cao Baiyu, translated by Stella Jiayue Zhu, take us on similar journeys. I'm particularly pleased to see the latter here, because SFF really needs to get in on translated fiction.

Then we come to Outstanding Short Story

for speculative works ranging from 2,000-7,499 words

Oluwatomiwa Ajeigbe gives us some stunning prose in A Witch's Transition in the City of Ghosts - a thing I yearn for in all my stories, and am often disappointed to find wanting. But not here. The story has a dreamlike quality at times, but it is in the moments focussing on the love of the protagonist for the forest spirit that the craft is really on show, and there are some scenes beautifully told that linger in the mind long after finishing reading.

Thomas Ha's Window Boy also has that quality, although achieved far more through lingering creepiness than touching the heart. It focusses in on the small scale, on the experience in a short time of a single person, and yet gives us so much beyond that in the background, almost without noticing.

Tantie Merle and the Farmhand 4200 by R.S.A. Garcia is funny. We don't get enough funny in our short SFF - and where else is such a good place for it as this? There is a simple joy to a story of a robot trying to outsmart a belligerent goat, but it's told with such a clear narrative voice, and with such well-articulated underlying sadness, that it is easy to be charmed even as you're amused. And it never strays into schmaltz, even as it manages sweet, which is a difficult line to tread.

Kemi Ashing-Giwa's Thin Ice may be only 2110 words, but it manages to cram into a short space a powerful punch of themes, feeling a vibes that makes it feel weightier than the space it takes up. Why bother with plot when you can achieve so much more with a set of vignettes, each slowly adding to the feeling of the story, like a mosaic novel's shorter cousin.

Cynthia Gomez's Lips Like Sugar is apparently a funny and raunchy bisexual vampire urban fantasy tale, and as soon as I can get my hands on it, I will be reading it.

This is a shortlist full of things distilled to their perfect essence, crafted to brilliance, just as short stories shine best at being.

Next it's The Critics Award

for reviews and analysis of the field of speculative literature

This is one close to our hearts, and not for our own win last year, but for the rare joy of seeing an award that celebrates criticism in all its forms. Every single nominee is an absolute standout, and if you can spend some time to seek out their words and opinions, your experience of SFF will be the richer for it.

It is particularly good to see critics here who do occupy a wider variety of spaces and media, whether it's writing in magazines, podcasting, tiktok or instagram, and it's great to see those being treated with equal weight, when a lot of the genre struggles to recognise audio-visual media particularly. I think this is genuinely the first time I've seen someone with a tiktok as their main platform like bookbaddiebri make it onto a shortlist like this, and I am so entirely here for it. There are so many brilliant reviewers like bri on tiktok, and their craft deserves the same respect as the more traditional media.


Then we're onto The Ember Award

for unsung contributions to genre

And here likewise, it's a banger of a list. Sheree Renée Thomas could have a whole essay just on her work. You may remember her for her collaboration with Janelle Monáe on The Memory Librarian? Her work on Black Panther? Her co-editing of Africa Risen, which gave us a plethora of top tier short fiction in 2022, perhaps? Editors are often the underappreciated part of the genre, their work hidden behind the authors, and it is always great to see them appreciated

DaVaun Sanders, as executive editor for FIYAH, deserves nothing less than our great respect. FIYAH is such a brilliant magazine, an endless source of fantastic short fiction, we can only salute those who make it happen, and doubly so when they manage it alongside publishing middle grade fantasy.

I haven't spoken about the middle grade category of the awards, because it's not a category I read in, so the sum total of my appreciation for every entry would be "that sounds cool", but I do note that there are two finalists in the Ember whose work includes children's fiction, the second being Kwame Mbalia. Where YA has its own spaces in SFF, though not the full appreciation it deserves among more traditional readers, middle grade is even less in the spotlight, and so it's great to see authors from that category being recognised here.

I'm only aware of Kate Elliott and A. C. Wise through their novels - particularly Unconquerable Sun and Wendy, Darling respectively - so I'm looking forward to dipping more into their work prompted by their inclusion on this shortlist. And hey, what is a good shortlist for if not bringing to light those whose work needs more appreciation?

And finally The Community Award

for Outstanding Efforts in Service of Inclusion and Equitable Practice in Genre

Khōréō is a stunner of a magazine, and one whose stories I always look forward to reading. They have a great team who do great work and they absolutely deserve all the love. A story that appeared in a 2022 issue - This Excessive Use of Pickled Foods by Leora Spitzer - still sticks with me two years later for the way it evokes the most personal of memories through taste, even while placing the story off in the space future. It was this that prompted me to start subscribing to them, and every issue since has only confirmed this as a great decision.

Sarah Gailey's Stone Soup likewise uses the medium of food to tell stories, varying widely across spectra of time, space and emotion through the different authors and how they each choose to tell their stories through their recipes. Favourites that have stuck with me include Naseem Jamnia's Khoresht-e Bademjoon and Shing Yin Khor's Congee, but there are so many different moods and modes here, as well as Gailey's own thoughtful sections, that there's something that would appeal to everyone. I very much enjoy getting each entry showing up in my inbox as they're released, and wondering what it will be this time.

I spoke above about the need for a place and respect for translated fiction, and so it is great to see Samovar, a quarterly special edition of the great Strange Horizons that focuses on translated speculative works here, getting exactly that, especially as they showcase the translators alongside the original authors, another unsung and overlooked but critical piece in the larger puzzle of the SFF space.

As above, a great awards shortlist gives you new things to discover, and I'll be diving into some of the podcasts at Awesome Black media imminently. I have likewise from this learned about the great work Voodoonauts do in creating a space for Black SFF writers. With one of their alumni appearing on the novelette shortlist right here, clearly what they're doing is amazing.

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And that's our run through. It isn't every category and every nominee, but what I know about the ones I have encountered tells me that the rest can only be fantastic. 

Voting is open now, and you can do so via the link here up until August 31st, 2024 at 11:59PM EDT, and while you're there, dip into the other categories, explore the finalists and their work, and make sure to support one of the best awards in the SFF space at the moment.

POSTED BY: Roseanna Pendlebury, the humble servant of a very loud cat. @chloroformtea.bsky.social

Wednesday, July 24, 2024

Video Game Preview: Concord by Firewalk Studios

Sony's newest live-service game leaves much to be desired.


The release of Overwatch turned a lot of heads in 2016 (and way fewer with the release of Overwatch 2 in 2022). Many clones were created in and around the time of the original’s release, with claims of copycat being echoed through the halls of the video game community (despite many of the games being in development at the same time). But with the fall of Overwatch over time and the rise of its toxic community, I thought we wouldn’t see much in the way of a new hero shooter any time soon. How wrong I was. And of all the publishers, Sony seems to have taken the reigns. Concord is a hero shooter that pits players against each other in 5v5 matchups. I played a few hours of the beta to get an idea about this sci-fi hero FPS.

Concord
’s intro animations are great, even if the content in its cutscenes leaves a bit to be desired. The characters are each unique and varied, but something was missing throughout the entire experience that Overwatch had in heaps: soul. Something felt missing throughout my time with the Concord characters that I never did with my first Overwatch session. I continued to be impressed by Concord's character animations when selecting a character, but for the life of me could only tell you the names of two of them after playing for hours. When I was coming close to finishing my time with the beta, one question continued to hum in my ear: why does this game exist?

I don’t mean this in a derogatory way, but out of, for a lack of better words, total bewilderment. As I mentioned previously, Sony is publishing this game. They bought this studio in a push for live-service games. They even had Naughty Dog discontinue the huge Factions sequel they were working on because Bungie said it wasn’t good enough to monetize. Yet this game made it through the wringer? How did this game get Sony to open their wallet? I was even more disappointed with the reveal of FairGame$ last year, but this… Well, this is a bit of a letdown. While Helldivers 2 has been a great co-op success, the rest of Sony’s games as a service (GaaS) approach seems to be too reliant on Bungie’s “expertise”. I hate to say it because every triple-A game takes a lot of resources and dedication to make, but Concord seems like it will be dead upon its arrival, especially if we take into account the dismal PC player numbers during the totally free and open beta weekend.


Not all is bad, despite its lack of a soul, the game mechanics feel decent. Once I managed to adjust my sensitivity a bit, the game became playable. Semi-smooth, though not quite on par with Bungie’s darlings (Destiny, Halo) or Respawn’s babies (Apex, Titanfall). Each character has a unique weapon (a la Overwatch) with infinite ammo, and each has unique abilities. Some of these abilities recharge over time, while others must be restocked by defeating enemies. I found some characters were much better damage dealers than others and that the time-to-kill sometimes felt too high for others. I would consistently put up better numbers with Lennox than with Haymar (the two characters whose names I can remember), though my assists were much higher with Haymar. The characters didn’t feel balanced, and I understand that some heroes will be more useful in some game types than in others, but some of them didn’t seem fun, while others felt more polished.

All characters can double jump, while some can even hover after double jump. Some characters can leave deployable items (that are all too obvious to see), while others have throwable items or tracking abilities. Having a mix of these gives players the odds for most success. Unfortunately, the character select screen doesn’t do a great job of dividing characters into classes to make that character selection more helpful. Despite all these characters having varied abilities, I found it quite odd that they didn’t include a practice range or tutorial area for the characters. Quite an odd omission. It wasn’t fun to learn how much damage an ability did while three people were shooting at you.

The few maps I played were decent, pretty much identical corridors that led to an open middle area. A few lanes allow the players to navigate with their team, or to infiltrate (with a fun invisible character, after all, who doesn’t love being killed by a random invisible player). The maps left a bit to be desired, though they weren’t necessarily lacking in the fundamental necessities a multiplayer map needs to be playable. There weren’t any bottlenecks, and players had the freedom to approach enemies from different angles if enemy domination was occurring (though I found it difficult to recover from being far behind). While the setting of the maps was varied in their palette, they didn’t quite live up to the sci-fi space scenes set up in the intro movies.


The game modes I played amounted to some of the same old same old, which was quite unfortunate. Overwatch’s escort maps provided heated, intense white-knuckled firefights. Nothing like that exists here. Though they use different names, the gameplay modes were essentially what you find in other games; clash point (round-based, no respawn, objective takeover), area control (domination), cargo run (no respawn extraction mode), takedown (team deathmatch), and trophy hunt (kill confirmed). I spent most of my time playing takedown and trophy hunt, as I found the other modes underwhelming. Clash point was awful. You have to be the first team to take over an objective or clear the enemy team. But you can never take the objective because it’s just one huge brawl in the middle of the map, and then the round is over. This is a team-based game, but with a bit less synergy than Overwatch or Apex Legends, so you have to work together with friends to have any chance of overcoming the enemy team. No one uses microphones, so you’d better hope you have four friends to help.

I enjoyed the UI animation that plays whenever you level up, and the Job Board which provides players with tasks to help level them up. I think that the customization options for each character are great. In addition to full costumes, you can tweak attachments and clothing articles among other things. Considering this is going to be a $40 game, I wonder what the monetization is going to look like going forward. If the game does gain some traction, this could make or break it.

I’m not sold on Concord. The beta isn’t broken, but it needed much more internal testing and brainstorming. The characters feel diverse for the sake of being diverse, and not as if they are part of a cohesive whole (Overwatch and Apex Legends do a nice job with this). It’s a pity because the studio put a lot of effort into the game, but with a $40 price tag and an abysmal player count for the beta, I don’t see it taking off, giving it much of a chance to improve over time. Who knows, I could be wrong and in a few years, I may know every character and each of their kits. But for now, if I were to rate this beta I’d give it a 6, and that’s quite unfortunate for a new triple-A title. The triple-A space is extremely competitive. A game doesn't have to be better than the best to find footing, but it has to be appealing, and Concord isn't there yet.




Posted by: Joe DelFranco - Fiction writer and lover of most things video games. On most days you can find him writing at his favorite spot in the little state of Rhode Island.

Film Review: Longlegs

The scariest movie of the year so far delivers a tense and creepy 1990s-set serial killer procedural that plays out like a long episode of the X-files. (spoiler free)


I saw Longlegs last Tuesday and I haven't been able to stop thinking about it – it's that good. 

As a caveat, I'm a big horror fan, and nearly nothing scares me. The only movies I tend to avoid are over-the-top generational trauma A24 movies like Hereditary. But reviewing (and even recommending!) genre films can be hard because non-fans tend to criticize the very things that tend to be hallmarks of the genre — things like excessive gore, overall feelings of unease, and the common plot tropes (haunted houses, supernatural killers).

But even among people who love horror, one person's yuck is another's yum. Some folks in particular think jump scares are cheap. When overdone, yes, but when they're perfectly timed with a scene and the backing track, they can be incredibly effective. (One of my favorite jump scares of all time is in Netflix's The Haunting of Hill House in episode 8. I still think about it to this day).

Longlegs was for me incredibly effective as a horror movie, though it's less straight-up horror and more of a psychological thriller. The comparisons in the lead-up marketing were correct in that it's like a modern-day Silence of the Lambs. Granted, Silence of the Lambs is a better movie, but if you've been searching for a contemporary vibe-equivalent, it hits the spot. Its darkness and supernatural elements reminded me of my love for the X-Files in the best possible way, especially in some of the more intense, murder-y monster-of-the-week episodes. 

The plot

Lee Harker (played by scream quieen Maika Monro) is a young FBI agent in Oregon in the 1990s, and she's blessed with a psychic ability that allows her preternatural insight into serial killer cases. Lee is weird, isolated, and not quiet right. She gets picked by her boss (played by Blair Underwood) to work on the Longlegs cold case that's suddenly hot again. Over the past 20 years, fathers out of the blue have been murdering their wife and children out of nowhere, and left behind at the grisly scenes are cryptic notes signed simply "LONGLEGS."

Lee goes all True Detective on the case and eventually figures out who Longlegs is, and along the way evil dolls, satanism, family ties, and an ex-glam rocker also get involved. The ending gets wrapped a little too nicely, in my opinion, but not enough to seriously affect my enjoyment of the overall story. There's a twist that's predictable but still extremely spooky and somehow gets even more spooky the more you think about it. 

The vibe

Oz Perkins, the director of Longlegs, is also the son of tortured Psycho star Anthony Perkins. With this movie, he has created an instant classic when it comes to dark, foreboding, and uncomfortable vibes. The film stock is muted and gray, and there's tons of claustrophobic and dark, wood-paneled '90s walls. The sound design — which alternates between complete silence and writhing, atonal, and building synth shrieks — is EXTREMELY effective in enhancing the mood and jump scares. Some of the scariest moments are simple shots that remind of the best moments in Insidious and The Conjuring, which is something I've been searching for now for years. 

Let's talk about Nic Cage

I managed to stay away from most of the wild promotional and marketing material before entering the theatre, so I barely know that Nic Cage was set to be the titular villain. I was a tad worried I'd ONLY be able to see crazy ol' Nic and nothing else, but I'm happy to report that's not the case. Nic becomes Longlegs in a way that's fairly unsettling. 

Longlegs is set to become an iconic villian in the horror cannon. He looks like a cross between Robert Smith from the Cure, Jennifer Coolidge, and Danny DeVito's Penguin in Batman Returns. Rather than wearing all black, he's always wearing dingy white clothes. His face is clearly the victim of botched strip-mall plastic surgery. I read an interview that said Longlegs is so in love with the devil that he's tried to carve his face into something beautiful, and it hasn't worked out well. 

Most of the time, I forgot I was watching Nic Cage, which is a testament to his craft. Occasionally in one of his extra-long villain monologues I'd see him, and in these situations I actually laughed (along with most of the audience). Longlegs is VERY over the top while also still terrifying. 

The Babadookification of Horror Villains

Remember when Netflix's algorhithm made a mistake and accidentally classified The Babadook as an LGBTQ pride film? The internet took the streets and made him into a meme, one that I very quickly loved and appreciated. 

Longlegs himself is going through something similar on TikTok right now for people with very weird For You Pages like myself. There's one part of the movie where Longlegs sings a VERY weird yet catchy song asking to be let in to a family's house, and people on TikTok are adding it humorously to videos of cats asking to be let in and diners waiting outside restaurants before they open. 

I love the intersection of horror and humor, and while Longlegs is a very scary movie, I did find myself laughing out loud multiple times during it. I think that's the sign of an enjoyable horror experience. Laughing at absurdity lets off steam if it's done right (I'm not talking about crap like Scary Movie, obviously). With Longlegs, there's more than enough tense, spooky moments to make up for the occasional scene where you remember "Oh yeah! Nic Cage is doing his thing, huh?"

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The Math

Baseline Score: 9/10

Bonuses: Absolutely unbeatable spooky vibes; Nic Cage excels as an ex-glam rocker satanist; there are actually even scary parts for seasoned horror fans.

POSTED BY: Haley Zapal is a lawyer-turned-copywriter living in Atlanta, Georgia. A co-host of Hugo Award-winning podcast Hugo, Girl!, she posts on Instagram as @cestlahaley. She loves nautical fiction, growing corn and giving them pun names like Timothee Chalamaize, and thinking about fried chicken.

Tuesday, July 23, 2024

Film Review: Kinds of Kindness

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I for one enjoyed Poor Things (reviewed on this blog by my esteemed colleague Arturo Serrano). It was deeply odd, yes, and I can certainly understand critiques of its gender politics (as a man I feel like it really isn’t my place to jut in on that subject either way, although it did seem to me that the film was portraying some of the happenings as morally dubious), but it was fascinating in its way. The film before that by director Yorgos Lanthimos, The Favourite, I likewise enjoyed. His most recent project, the subject of this review, is his new film Kinds of Kindness, released on June 2024 in the United States, written by Lanthrimos and Efthimis Filippou, and distributed by Searchlight Pictures.

Kinds of Kindness is a very odd film even in its format. It is not one single narrative, so common as to be assumed by the culture at large as being what a film naturally is, but rather an anthology film of three different segments that share actors but nothing else - no characters, no plot elements, nothing, beyond thematic connections. You could even argue that there is no single genre between them; the first segment has no noticeable supernatural element, the second quite clearly does (although the nature of it is left unstated, and you could stretch it to be solely mundane, but I don’t think that works as well), and the third is such a tossup I’m not entirely sure how to categorize it. I will say something unequivocal right now: this film is fucking weird.

I commented about this film on a forum that I frequent and the response I got called The Favourite and Poor Things as his relatively mainstream films, and that this film marked his return to his deeply odd indie film origins. That comment made me reflect upon just how flexible, how broad, that term ‘mainstream’ is. Those two films had coherent, comprehensible plots that posited a chain of events with comprehensible, if strange, reasons for the courses they take. The three segments in this film, on the other hand, only do so much of that. The end result is a deeply odd, disorienting experience. It brought to mind a friend’s description of Tommy Wiseau’s The Room: “imagine if you described the idea of a movie to aliens, and what life on Earth is like to said aliens, and then giving them the equipment to make a movie, but never actually letting them actually see for themselves what movies are like, or what life on Earth is like.” Wiseau blundered his way into the narrative uncanny valley, whereas Lanthimos has done it very deliberately; both films, via different paths to it, feel like they are bizarre approximations of movies, ersatz movies even, and you wonder if you are even ‘watching’ them so to speak.

The first segment is about a boss and employee at a corporation that has become something of an unhealthy sadomasochistic relationship; the boss has designed his employee’s life for him, choosing a house and a spouse for him, all the way to dictating his daily schedule. The second involves a couple: a marine biologist who goes missing on an expedition, upon whose return her police officer husband becomes convinced she is not really her. The third involves a cult that wants to raise the dead, and is willing to go through a rather bizarre process to find someone who can do it.

As stated previously, these stories are not directly related to one another. They do share certain thematic elements; all take fairly normal classes of relationships and twist them in discomforting ways, so that they are still recognizably what they are, and yet distorted to extreme degrees. They are all about intrusions into the normal by things that are deeply unhealthy, indeed dangerous, for their health and their wellbeing. In two out of three cases, that unhealthy thing has already subsumed their lives; in the remaining one, it jolts into existence with a bang.

There’s a certain emphasis on the unpleasant parts of the human psyche, be it cruelty or lust or the urge to find belonging even in the most unpleasant, dysfunctional places. There is a fair amount of sexual content, nudity a few times, group sex once, and sexual assault once, as well as some occasions of dubious power dynamics (one of these lets you see a naked Willem Dafoe, which is something I never thought I’d see). This is a focus that reminds me of the oeuvre of the Coen Brothers, in their focus on how nobody can ever live up to the loftiest ideals, that we are still creatures of blood and sweat and tears and hormones (lots of hormones). There are all sorts of personalities here, basically all of them dysfunctional in some way. As the Eurythmics put it:


Some of them want to use you

Some of them want to get used by you

Some of them want to abuse you



This film is a filmmaker’s film, and perhaps most of all an actor’s film. Willem Dafoe is deeply unsettling as an abusive boss and as a sex cult leader (that’s why you see him naked). Jesse Plemons perhaps gets to steal the whole show, with prominent roles in all three segments, sometimes meekly submissive and unsure what to do, and at other times losing his mind as he tries to establish control over his circumstances. And, for fans of Poor Things, Emma Stone returns with a raft of more weird, unsettling performances. I have seen comments on Bluesky saying that Stone represents progress in women’s roles in cinema by virtue of letting women play creepy little weirdos; Hollywood should let her do more of that because she’s very good at it.

I’m honestly not entirely sure if the concepts exist in any earthly language to properly describe Kinds of Kindness. It is a film that feels deliberately alienating, as if it employs Bertolt Brecht’s distancing effect, although leaving what social structure it wants to draw attention completely unindicated. I’m not sure there is a genre that this film fits into, or what audience he was going for. I’m not entirely sure I enjoyed this film, but I certainly don’t regret it. It is, however, a hard sell to basically everyone on planet Earth.

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The Math

Nerd Coefficient: i/0

POSTED BY: Alex Wallace, alternate history buff who reads more than is healthy.

The Arthur C. Clarke Award 2024: A Shortlist Discussion

Awards Season is well upon us - we’ve had the results of the Nebulas, the Locus Awards and the BSFA, Hugo voting has just closed, we got an Ignyte shortlist just yesterday, and many other awards are in progress besides. But we’re not interested in those right now! Today, we’re focussing on the Clarke Award.

To partially quote some of their website’s own blurb, the annual Arthur C. Clarke Award is given for the best science fiction novel first published in the United Kingdom during the previous year. It’s one of the most prestigious UK based SFF awards, though not quite so well known internationally, and so not hitting the same level of impact as your Hugos, your Nebulas and so on. It’s a juried award whose judges are drawn from members of the various groups who support it, currently the British Science Fiction Association, the Science Fiction Foundation and the Sci-Fi-London film festival. Jury members vary year on year, but over the years, the Clarkes have developed a distinctive flavour of SF that tends to make their awards, and oftentimes means a rather different slate of novels than other SF awards covering the same year, and a very interesting one.

This year, the shortlist is as follows:

Chain-Gang All-Stars - Nana Kwame Adjei-Brenyah
The Ten Percent Thief - Lavanya Lakshminarayan
In Ascension - Martin Macinnes
The Mountain in the Sea - Ray Nayler (this was published in the US in 2022, but in the UK in 2023)
Some Desperate Glory - Emily Tesh
Corey Fah Does Social Mobility - Isabel Waidner

Clara and Roseanna decided that this year, they would get stuck into the shortlist and come back with their opinions on the novels, the shortlist as a whole, and what the Clarke is covering that other awards may be missing, as well as their thoughts on who should win.

Roseanna: Before we get into the actual novels, to start us off what is a Clarke Award vibe? What makes the Clarkes different from other awards? Why are we interested?

For me, while I’ve never set out to read the shortlist before, my partner has been reading them every year for the last few, and so we’ve chatted about them, and I feel like I’ve got a rough sense of what they tend to be like. From what I can tell, it tends to be less just the big splashy things that make all the awards, and more slightly off the beaten path, interesting, possibly more difficult or challenging ones that can do well in a juried award but not so much in a popular vote. Take Deep Wheel Orcadia by Harry Josephine Giles for instance (2022 winner). That was a collection of poetry in the Orkney dialect of Scots with facing translation done interestingly, where the poems all slowly revealed a story about people on a deep space station. Not going to be everyone’s cup of tea, but the Clarke gave it a chance to shine. Last year, I think it was very clifi heavy, but drew from a pool that mostly didn’t overlap with the mainstream, including I believe a French nominee. There tends to be one book every year that fills a more mainstream or accessible slot, but that’s the general sense I get of them.

And that “drawing from a different pool” is what made me interested. The Hugos, Nebulas and Locus often overlap heavily, so I’m always keen to look at awards that make me aware of other things - the Ignytes are great for that, and a shameless plug here for the Subjective Chaos Kind of Awards, for whom both Adri and I are jury this year, but whom I previously enjoyed shortlists of again for showing me something new and different. That’s what I was hoping for when I decided to read along for this Clarke shortlist.

And I think we are seeing that - we’ll get to discussing Corey Fah Does Social Mobility in a bit, but it’s the sort of book I struggle to imagine on one of the more mainstream, popular voted SFF awards. It’s just too weird.

Other than “Roseanna asked for volunteers”, what made you interested in joining me on this readalong?

Clara: I’ve struggled with Clarke himself, but many other books on Clarke shortlists were exactly the sort of imaginative works that make SFF such a perfect medium to explore big ideas. Not always successfully, to be sure: when I look at the Clarke awards, I see a lot of books that do very thoughtful things, but which I don’t always enjoy very much–as seen in this very discussion! Meanwhile, when I look at lists of Hugo and Nebula nominees, I see a lot of books that I consider pleasant, enjoyable SFF–engaging, fun, entertaining–but not necessarily thoughtful. (For what it’s worth, the books that make it to both lists–e.g., Yoon Ha Lee’s Machineries of Empire series, Ann Leckie’s Ancillary books, Sue Burke’s Semiosis, Adrian Tchaikovsky’s Children of Time–tend to be ones that I thought were superb.)

Roseanna: I think I would agree to some degree with that assessment (though of course sweeping generalisations always prompt “well… except…”). I definitely think this is a particularly thoughtful (and thought-provoking) shortlist as well. It’s certainly a lot of what I was hoping for in reading the Clarkes - so I think for me it’s got that essence pretty well captured.

Clara: Two books that struck me as extremely characteristic of what I expect from the Clarke Awards are Chain-Gang All-Stars and The Ten Percent Thief. Both were primarily interested in using the medium of SF to point at a problem in modern society (criminal justice in Chain-Gang All-Stars, capitalism-fueled inequality in The Ten Percent Thief), and both did it in ways that made some interesting structural choices. In The Ten Percent Thief, every single chapter is told from a different character perspective. Some of those stories are pretty self-contained, but others circle around the main events of the plot–such as it is. The oppressed rise up, yada yada yada. You don’t read this book for a plot. You read it for a deep dive into the dystopia of a purely capitalistic society, obsessed with productivity, in its most extreme form. Some of it worked very well–the indoctrination of school children, the fate of the elderly, the decision to reproduce. Other bits, such as an extremely silly plot point about emojis, were less convincing.

Chain Gang All-Stars was less playful, and went so far as to have footnotes, which provided details about the studies or court cases underlying the events in a particular scene–a decision that has never actually worked for me. And the brutal violence that is the core of this book is. . . effective in making its point, but so disagreeable that I felt myself backing away from the story. I was not strong enough to have the conversation that the author wanted to have with me. 

Reading fiction requires a certain degree of openness and immersion, a willingness to go on a journey with the characters. But the brutality in this book is not something I can be open to in this way. I had to back away to protect myself. I can read about it in non-fiction just fine–which is interesting. It’s as if I can put up barriers between myself and the real world more effectively than between myself and fictional characters, whose inner thoughts and wishes are presented more intimately. That’s one reason why fiction can be such an effective medium to make a point about the real world. But when taken to extremes, as in Chain Gang All-Stars, it becomes so distressing that I shut down and disengage. I would not have finished this book if I hadn’t started reading it for this discussion.

Roseanna: Chain-Gang All-Stars was the last of the shortlist I finished, and it’s the one that took me the longest - I had to keep pausing to stare into space and think about industrial prison complexes and systemic oppression, which is apparently my method of coping with such a raw, unfilteredly truthful book. And you’re right, it absolutely takes it to the extreme. But for me? I think it really worked. It’s completely, brutally honest about something that is unutterably awful. Yes, it’s using the SFF, near-future elements to really turn the dial up, but I think a lot of its effectiveness for me is how not-distant it really felt. It’s horrifying in its proximity. But equally I can see how that’s going to hit so differently person to person, especially if it’s something that is closer to the reader’s life than it is to mine. I imagine a lot of people do DNF it for precisely that reason, and I wouldn’t hold it against them.

Clara: Me neither. But even if the DNF rate is higher than normal, that shouldn’t be taken as an indictment of the book. Chain-Gang All-Stars was not trying to be an easy book, and I think it was incredibly effective at accomplishing what it set out to do. The fact that I do not care for that type of thing takes nothing away from the author’s success at conveying a vision–footnote quibbles notwithstanding!

Roseanna: I think the footnotes though did actually work pretty well for me (though I am generally mixed in my appreciation of them - I found them often quite patronising in Babel, for instance). Partly because some of the time they gave me information I simply did not have. But even when it was something I already knew, they kept dragging the narrative back to the real world, back to the facts of the here and the now, so you can never escape how relevant this story is to reality. This is not escapism, and it’s not going to let you pretend otherwise - honestly, I think one of the best uses of footnotes I’ve seen in a long while.

But again, you have to be in a position where being dragged back in that way is tenable to the reader.

Going back to The Ten Percent Thief, I think this is a really interesting one to hold in contrast to Chain-Gang All-Stars, because you’re right, they both are very bluntly using a future SF story to point at a now-problem, without the distance of allegory, metaphor or other tools that let the reader distance themself from the problems at hand. But at the same time, I think they approach the use of the SF elements entirely differently.

I’d characterise Chain-Gang as barely SF, in a lot of ways. The technology is the barest minimum it needs to ram home its point about the current system, and at no point does it feel like the story is interested in the tech for its own sake - we dwell on the pain-administering torture system for what it does to people, but it could very much be a stand-in for any kind of torture (and indeed that connection is made explicit in the footnotes). It doesn’t, for the most part, let any of the shiny stuff distract from the core themes/message.

Whereas I think on the flip-side, Ten Percent Thief really leans in on the tech, the future dystopia, the details - we learn a lot more about what it looks and feels like to live with all of this stuff, and without it. And it’s not extraneous, because a lot of the plot is about hammering home the contrast between those who have and those who do not, but it made it feel to me a lot more obviously science fictional. From the moment you step in, you are very clearly in a world of the not-now, even if it’s commenting on the now.

I do think this is one of the weaker ones on the shortlist. Not weak, because tbh it’s a pretty strong selection for me, but a little less effective in how it does its messaging than the others, and I think the focus on the tech, on constantly drawing these very detailed and realised pictures of a world absolutely swimming in technology, is part of that. The other part I think is a structural issue - the mosaic novel keeps you circling around, dotting between perspectives, and doesn’t really let you bed into the story in the way that a smaller number of perspectives might. Obviously on the flip side, that means more viewpoints, a more bird’s eye appreciation of the broader landscape the story exists in, which can be useful (and is here) but I think it comes at a price, and that price is the emotional immediacy.

Clara: Yes, exactly. That structural decision to keep shifting perspectives was a calculated risk, and I think, unlike the decision to lean into the brutality of Chain-Gang, it didn’t quite support Lakshminarayan’s vision as effectively as a different structure might have. The benefits of the breadth of setting were not enough to offset the disconnection that comes from never getting to be inside a character’s head for more than a few pages. (And, of course, one could perhaps have a meta-conversation about the disconnection from the book reifying the disconnection of the society being portrayed here, but the fact remains that the efficacy of your work does depend on making your readers care enough to pick the book up again after setting it down to make a sandwich).

Roseanna: Let’s move on then to The Mountain in the Sea by Ray Nayler, a novel that touches on some things I know we’re both interested in, and that you at least are particularly knowledgeable about.

I liked this one but didn’t love it, I have to admit. It did a lot of things I find cool and interesting - it was very strong on the ideas side of things - but it just didn’t quite have the spark I needed to really grab me. I think some of that may have been the characters? I was interested in them a lot more than I cared about them, and some of them felt really quite distant from the narrative emotionally, for a number of reasons. But they also just never felt like what the book really wanted to focus on, which was cool octopus linguistics. And I get it! Cool octopus linguistics is a great thing to focus on… but it just never quite for me made the step up into “amazing novel” instead of “great idea, now let’s add in a story as well”.

Clara: With this book, I was also most interested in the octopus linguistics, since I’m a linguist in my day job. In many ways, that fell short—but in kind of interesting ways. For example, there’s a great amount of ink devoted to describing how octopuses express themselves with skin images. Since octopus skin patterns can read differently depending on lighting conditions, and since skin also expresses emotion and is responsible for camouflage and sensory input, octopuses have to balance this wildly complex combination of tasks assigned to one organ. This is presented as something that makes octopus speech uniquely difficult and different from human speech–except it’s not, actually. At least, not for this reason. Human vocal tracts are also responsible for breathing and eating, so there’s also overlapping tasks assigned to one organ. And speakers of sign language are relying on organs that are also responsible almost every way in which humans interact with the world. Spoken speech can also be obscured by ambient noise and distorted by someone speaking with their mouth full or speaking while laughing, just as skin colour will look different in different light conditions, so we need to be able to disentangle signal and noise. So, really, there’s nothing too special there about octopuses.

What does make octopus language persuasively different to human speech is the treatment of conceptual metaphor. In human speech, it’s based on human physical interactions with the world. Since octopuses interact with the world very differently from humans, their conceptual metaphors are going to be fundamentally different, which means that a lot of really basic core assumptions (‘up is good’) won’t apply. This was great! Deeply alien modes of thinking is great! Except for the bit where our main scientist sees an arrangement of physical objects, interprets it as an altar, and from there leaps to wild conclusions about octopus mythology and cultural attitudes towards humans. 

Roseanna: I knew you’d have a lot of thoughts about this one. 

As someone with a background in a field that includes archaeology/ancient history, the altar scene did scream “aha! Ritual purposes!” at me in a depressingly familiar way, I will admit. 

Clara: Ah, but that’s only because you’re assuming in your humanocentric way that altar-looking things must actually have ritual purposes. But with octopuses you can assume nothing! They’re too different! Incomprehensibly alien to our embodied way of viewing the world! We’ve just spent 200 pages being told this!

(Except, yeah, it was ritual purposes.)

Roseanna: That said, there were a lot of things about it I really did like - the AI was, I think, pretty well done, both as a concept and as a character (which I think some stories fail at by doing one but not the other). I tend also not to be a huge fan of the sort of dystopian near-future stories that this was doing, for a number of reasons, but I think Nayler managed that part of it actually pretty well. Yes, it was depressing, because it was meant to be, but it felt like the way it was presenting that bleak future was actually serving purposes in the story, not just being bleak for the sake of it, or for an aesthetic.

And on the language side, I really appreciated that “this takes time and effort and isn’t an easy thing” was made pretty clear as part of the process. I have a personal bugbear of books where two people learn each other’s language super quickly - Project Hail Mary by Andy Weir sticks particularly in mind for it - and I was glad Nayler acknowledged that there would be difficulties and the process would take a long time, to the point where the lady scientist protagonist at one point references this as being something that would take years and generations after her to solve. I know it’s not fun and sexy to leave problems unsolved in stories, but “learning mutually unintelligible languages without any aid in a few days” is even more unsexy to me, so I like to see books that acknowledge that reality.

Clara: The idea of what it takes to learn a new language was actually a domain in which the AI-based storyline and the octopus-based storyline could have interwoven in some beautiful, linguistically-informed ways, but in the end didn’t. One very lively debate in linguistics is the idea of symbolic combinatorics–decomposing meaning or ideas into abstract symbols (e.g., words or phrases) that can be combined in novel ways. One of the foundational principles of Chomskyan generative linguistics is that all of language can be understood in this way: you just need to find the right abstract symbols and the right rules of combinations–e.g., a sentence has a subject and a predicate; a transitive verb phrase contains a verb and a direct object; a noun phrase contains an article plus a noun. Nayler invokes this perspective quite explicitly for the octopuses.

However, this symbolic combinatorial approach breaks in a lot of ways. For example, idioms have meanings that are not derived from the component parts (e.g., ‘cut the cheese’ doesn’t just mean ‘prepare a charcuterie board’, but can also mean ‘pass gas’). And irregularities of syntax and morphology show up everywhere: ‘I talk/I talked’ does not follow the same pattern of ‘I go/I went’ or ‘I eat/I ate’. So a big split in linguistics is the divide between so-called ‘generativists’, who want to use the symbolic approach for everything, and ‘usage-based’ linguists, who think everything is more related to statistical co-occurrences, and learned patterns.

And this is how the whole octopus linguistics storyline could have connected really deeply to the storyline about the personhood of the AI. Because in this era of ChatGPT, we all know that LLMs are able to generate incredibly human-sounding language from learning statistical cooccurences in words. But the AI in this book doesn’t do that: it explicitly denies similarities to LLMs (although rather late and kind of weakly, which makes me wonder whether that was a quick 2023-era edit after ChatGPT was released). So conceivably this AI is not based on learning statistical co-occurrences, like all our modern enshittifying stochastic parrots, but is instead somehow realizing the dreams of the Chomskyan linguists. It is using language in a symbolic combinatorial way, the same way that the octopuses are claimed to be doing (and in a completely different way from what usage-based linguists claim humans are doing). There could have been this beautiful synthesis of themes here! But that didn’t happen. 

I did rather enjoy the repeated motif of distributed consciousness, though–the way the split in agency between an octopuses central brain and its arm-brains was mirrored in other human domains: corporations not knowing what their subsidiary companies are doing; or drone control mechanisms with semi-autonomous decision-making capacities. That was very elegantly done. 

Roseanna: Elegant is a great word for it - I keep circling back to "neat", myself. 

On the whole, I had a good time with this one, and I can see why it’s on the shortlist - it’s doing some cool ideas, it’s definitely very timely and there’s a clear hook to explain why it’s different from everything else around at the moment. 

Clara: A book whose position on the shortlist I can’t really understand is In Ascension. Well, no, that’s not fair. A book whose position on the shortlist I resent is In Ascension. Not so much because it’s bad, but because it seems to be doing the fluid-genre thing that got a lot of attention when Ian McEwan wrote a book about sentient AI and then denied that it was SF. At the time, a lot of the discourse in the SFFisphere was outrage, that McEwan didn’t actually understand the genre that he was refusing to be lumped into, that SFF was more sophisticated and thoughtful than ‘travelling 10 times the speed of light in anti-gravity boots,’ without ‘actually looking at the human dilemmas’. But somehow, I almost feel like he had a point, because In Ascension, for all that it’s about using billions-year-old archaea discovered in mysterious ocean vents to explore space, really was focused on human dilemmas–so much so that it does not feel like an SF book. It feels like a book that uses the trappings of SF (space ships, aliens, time travel) to help the main characters come to terms with their relationships with their mothers and their history of abuse as a child. And I got increasingly grumpy as this shape of the narrative emerged: fewer and fewer pages remained to address the aliens, and still each new page brought yet another goddamn meditation on childhood and mothers. I was promised space aliens and time travel, and instead got navel gazing and interiority. Also, the ending was just Battlestar Galactica presented as if it were a novel and ingenious idea.

This shortlist seems characterized by SF books that want to have conversations about society and culture: fascism, inequality, philosophy of language, sentience, justice, etc. I know that, traditionally, the Clarke Awards have leaned literary*, but even the most litfic-y ones have usually incorporated the speculative elements to form a core part of the book. But this book is essentially a very prosaic character journey, which fully skimps out on SF concepts to the point that the character journey is closed off while the aliens and time travel are left completely unexplained. They were a gimmicky device, rather than core part of the narrative, and that feels rude.

Roseanna: Ok I find this really interesting, because on the one hand, I also really did not like In Ascension, but on the other, I think I totally disagree? I didn’t find its engagement with SFF tropes particularly gimmicky, and in fact some of what I disliked about it was actually that it reminded me of a certain type of SF book that I already don’t like.

Time for a shameful admission here: I don’t really care about space travel. Which I know is a terrible crime and a black mark against me as a person. But I don’t, and never really have. Space is a perfectly fine medium for telling other stories, and a wonderful metaphor for the unknown, for isolation or for distance or danger, but the nuts and bolts of space travel itself, the facts of it? Bore me to tears. And I found in this - a book in which a lot of page time is devoted to the mechanics of food production and consumption in space, and of preparation for existence on a long mission in space - really really not my thing in exactly the same way the type of older school, take-the-world-as-it-is-but-change-just-one-thing SF stories are. And so it felt incredibly SFF-y to me. Just… not in a good way.

Clara: Ah, I love that stuff! It’s why I enjoy Andy Weir so much. But it does lead one to expect a pay-off, like some way in which all the details of genetically engineering algae foodstuffs will turn out to engage with the SFy bits of the tale–y’know, with the aliens and time travel and so on. But instead I got a deep dive into feelings, which is not what the book implicitly promised. 

Roseanna: I have read precisely one Andy Weir book and it made me very cross, so I suspect we are coming into this with some veeeeryyyy different preferences.

Anyway, on the flip side, I found a lot of the lit-fic-ness of it very effective and affecting (they just weren’t themes I particularly tend to seek out in stories). The main character is both incredibly nostalgic and maudlin, dwelling on her past, her life, her existence in the world, while also extremely cold and detached from it all. And I found the thoughtfulness of that perspective, the horrible inevitability of the choices we watch her make, the sheer humanity of her, the way she shields herself from her own feelings, really evocative. I just also disliked her and found her quite frustrating to read about.

It’s also a very open-ended story. The way I interpreted the significant thing that happens to the main character and her crew mates right at the end is definitely not the only way that scene can be interpreted, and I have mixed feelings in general about unresolved endings or ambiguity, but here I really felt it worked. I put the book down and immediately felt the need to discuss it with someone, to find out if they interpreted it as I did, if they took the same things from it as I did. And that is ultimately what I think it does well - it’s a discussional book. I think it would be perfect for a book club.

But what it’s discussing just isn’t my thing. I have a moderate to high fear of the deep sea - oh no there’s a massive terrifying deep sea sinkhole. I don’t like the mechanics of space travel - we spend the majority of the book at a station where people are working towards space travel. And so on and so on. It cherry picked a bunch of my least favourite SF-y things and then made me appreciate how interestingly it lingered over them. Which I thought was pretty neat.

And then in a total contrast, we have Some Desperate Glory by Emily Tesh. It’s also very much in space, and yet I really loved this one, I have to admit. I read and reviewed it waaaay back last year as an arc, adored it, and have steadily become a more and more annoying hype-merchant for it as more people have read it. That being said… it doesn’t feel an entirely Clarkey book (where In Ascension feels extremely one) to me? It’s by far the more conventional end of SF, which I have absolutely no objections to, but feels slightly out of step with some previous years’ shortlists, as I scan through them. But who am I to judge that?

Possibly its point of difference that merits its inclusion - and it’s definitely somewhat divisive from what I’ve seen of reviews across the year since it came out - is how it drops us in from the off with a deeply unlikeable character who is, frankly, a horrible person, and then only builds up the sympathy for her over a fairly long span. It’s doing the work to really dig into the tropes of the sort of SF that is the legacy of stories like Starship Troopers and Ender’s Game, and that requires going in hard at the start. I’ve seen a number of people DNF the book because they hate Kyr, or because they didn’t think she got enough of a “redemption arc”, which for me I think misses the point of the book. She’s not redeemed, but she does learn, and it’s a book about that learning, and about shifting the point of view of someone raised in a fascist space cult.

But it’s not a book, I think, that is gunning for that sort of easy like anyway. There’s a bit of a scourge in SFF literature at the moment of characters being discussed in terms of how “relatable” they are, and this, as a story, just thoroughly refutes that. Nearly everyone is terrible! Even the “good” characters are kind of awful! Does that invalidate their position in the narrative? Absolutely not (which brings us back to Chain-Gang All-Stars too). Even right at the start, even despite how immediately vile some of her opinions are, I feel for Kyr when she’s given the bad news about what her role in the fascist cult space base is going to be (human incubator and sex object). She does not have to be relatable or particularly sympathetic for her situation to be appalling, and I think this is something Tesh explores throughout the story.

Clara: Yes,  the character work here was really strong–as was the plot! This was my favourite of the shortlist–and if it’s not characteristic of the Clarkey vibe, then possibly that reflects my opinion of Clarkeyness as a genre. I’ve remarked elsewhere that I get impatient with Arthur C Clarke’s desire to focus on ideas over story and character, and the other books on this shortlist have definitely mirrored that focus. But Some Desperate Glory was absolutely focused on taking me for a ride first, and that different balance of story and message meant I was more open to have the conversation about indoctrination into fascism and the role of upbringing and experience in building our worldviews. 

And that was such a deftly handled topic! Without getting too much into developments that for me were a complete surprise (there’s something to be said for going into a book without having read reviews!), I loved seeing how different versions of Kyr can vary wildly in some areas, while still maintaining core personality traits, such as kneejerk respect for authority. I loved Kyr’s reflections on how the different versions of herself perceive and react to events. I loved how Avi was a complete wildcard, no matter the circumstances. Even the technomagical macguffin worked well, integrated into the plot in very key ways that made me believe it was important. It used its SF apparatus effectively in exactly the way that In Ascension didn’t. Overall, A+ book, would book again.

Roseanna: I too went into this completely cold (woo early arc way back when) and absolutely, it made the experience so much better. I’m not usually a big one for fussing about spoilers, because they do not usually affect my reading experiences but this one… yeah this one I think it makes a difference.

And then on yet another flip side, we come to our last book on the shortlist, and one I think would in many ways be impossible to spoil because it’s so… it’s an experience, not a story. And that’s Corey Fah Does Social Mobility by Isabel Waidner.

Clara: Corey Fah Does Social Mobility is a book that I think I’m not smart enough to understand. With the other books on this list, it was clear which element of society was being discussed. Sometimes so overtly explicitly that I felt like I was getting a rather tiresome lesson rather than a story. But with this, my reaction throughout and after I was done was . . . wut?

There were whisps of interpretation in places that I could (maybe) understand: This dream sequence is a commentary on how capitalism forces the workers to be the product, chewing them up and spitting them out. That sequence is a commentary on the elitism of cultural prestige and how–even when it explicitly attempts to bring in marginalised groups–it remains exclusionary. And the fawn-spider hybrid is actually a manifestation of our narrator’s own history . . .? … ???? But I was mostly baffled and confused. 

Roseanna: Possibly some useful context (or maybe not, I’m not the boss of you) - Waidner wrote this after having won the Goldsmiths literary prize for their previous novel, Sterling Karat Gold. For those who haven’t read it, the story in Corey Fah begins with an author who has won a big literary prize going to collect their trophy, at which point things go absolutely pear shaped, and they face an amount of bureaucracy and strangeness in the ensuing attempts to fix the mess-up. I couldn’t help but assume there was something in there about Waidner’s own experience, but possibly I’m being too literal.

Clara: I think I agree with you on that. When I finished the book and tried to make sense of what had just happened to me, I looked up who Waidner was, and saw the list of award nominations and the Goldsmiths win, so inferring a commentary on that seems reasonable. But even if we’re confident that this is correct, I’m not sure it really helps. Being able to accurately count the legs on a fawn-spider hybrid does not make me a zoologist.

Roseanna: Very true (and the eldritch horror Bambi is really one of the parts of the story that has stuck with me the most, for good or for ill). In any case, for me, this is fighting for my top spot. I totally agree with you that it is baffling, but I loved that. I loved just sitting with it for this surreal, wormholey, ungodly creaturey, genre-bending ride. It was a book I just chose to sit back and experience rather than really trying to pick apart, which it definitely benefitted from - I’d have driven myself to distraction trying to find definitive, unambiguous meaning in it.

But it is also absolutely impossible to explain. It’s a vibes book. It’s an experience book. I can say it’s got some sort of terrifying insectile-deer in it that possibly at one point works in a dead end fast food job, and neon beige and wormholes that may or may not exist in an ambiguously but somehow definitely concrete-ful urban landscape. None of that really gives a reader a sense of what it is as a book though. And I think it’s kind of impossible to. It’s the sort of experience you just have to have, or not, and there’s not really an in between. But I tend to love those.

So, on that slightly unhelpful note… final thoughts. Who’s your winner, if you were suddenly given the power to award it yourself?

Clara: Some Desperate Glory, hands down. I’m pretty sure it won’t win, just because the rest of the shortlist makes it clear that the Clarke Award panel are more interested in much less traditional SF stories. But my reading taste is not that spicy, it seems.

Roseanna: I think for me it would be Chain-Gang All-Stars. It’s just too… I’m waving my hands here desperately searching for a good word that encompasses what it is. Whatever that adjective is, it’s too much that a book to go unrecognised. Powerful, I suppose, is the closest I can come. And sharp. It’s perfectly clear about the message it has and how to tell it, and Nana Kwame Adjei-Brenyah, at least in my view, has managed it so precisely, so flawlessly.

But honestly, I think this was just a really strong shortlist as a whole. I don’t think I’d be upset to see any of them win, even though I have my favourites, and above all, it feels interesting, which was what I was craving most, and what my previous awareness of the Clarke Award shortlist has led me to expect/hope for, so I was really glad to see it deliver.

Thank you Clara for doing this discussion with me!

The winner for 2024 will be declared in the evening (UK time) of Wednesday the 24th of July, so we'll soon find out how right (or wrong) our picks were.

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References:

Nana Kwame Adjei-Brenyah, Chain-Gang All-Stars, [Harvill Secker, 2023]
Lavanya Lakshminarayan, The Ten Percent Thief, [Rebellion, 2023]
Martin MacInnes, In Ascension, [Atlantic Books, 2023]
Ray Nayler, The Mountain in the Sea, [W&N, 2023]
Emily Tesh, Some Desperate Glory, [Orbit, 2023]
Isabel Waidner, Corey Fah Does Social Mobility, [Hamish Hamilton, 2023]

Footnotes:

* Except for Retribution Falls, in 2010, which is quite popcorn, but also fabulous and I encourage everyone to read Chris Wooding’s delightful Tales of the Ketty Jay series (reviewed here by me!) right now.

CLARA COHEN lives in Scotland in a creaky old building with pipes for gas lighting still lurking under her floorboards. She is an experimental linguist by profession, and calligrapher and Islamic geometric artist by vocation. During figure skating season she does blather on a bit about figure skating. She is on mastodon at wandering.shop/@ergative

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