Showing posts with label epic fantasy. Show all posts
Showing posts with label epic fantasy. Show all posts

Thursday, July 2, 2026

Book Review: The Dragon Has Some Complaints, by John Wiswell

A multi-headed allegory that rewards multiple readings

It’s tricky to attempt to pin down in a few paragraphs all the things that The Dragon Has Some Complaints is trying to say, because it operates on several layers of meaning at the same time. Its tale of a grumpy, battle-weary dragon who infiltrates a city of dragon riders to get free food while he quietly plots his revenge on humans is both hilarious and heart-wrenching, and the points it has to make about pain, kindness, hubris, cruelty, loyalty and resilience get richer the more one reflects on them.

The first and most obvious level of analysis has to do with disability and chronic pain. When we meet the protagonist, the fierce dragon Garrodigh, he’s badly injured and traumatized. In one of the frequent and interminable wars between human kingdoms, a cannon shot knocked him down from the sky, leaving him with the bones of one leg shattered, his wings torn to shreds, his four heads reduced to three, and his memory partially erased. Other dragons shun him because of an alleged closeness to humans he can’t remember. He can barely hunt his food, much less defend himself. If hunger doesn’t kill him soon, a stray cannon ball will. By the time the book starts, he already has nothing to lose.

Author John Wiswell has spoken openly and at length about his own experience with disability and chronic pain, and he uses that personal perspective to great effect in the book. Because the nature of dragonkind is all explosive fire and brimstone, Wiswell employs the imagery of water and ice whenever he needs to refer to things that harm dragons. The pain in Garrodigh’s broken bones is described as a freezing sensation, like being stabbed with needles of ice. To a dragon’s mind, the nearness of death feels cold. And in a fascinating bit of worldbuilding, dragons in this universe can’t swim. A dragon’s fire can’t survive immersion in water.

The reader will find such allusions repeatedly, because once Garrodigh sneaks his way into a dragon-friendly human city, the book takes its time to very gradually depict his recovery. These humans have an entire arsenal of techniques to rehabilitate injured dragons, but even after he has laboriously regained his full mobility, an echo of the pain still lingers. There’s no perfect cure, and a body that has taken that kind of beating will never not carry its old wounds. For a book that has dragons, this is a strikingly realistic representation of physical therapy in both its benefits and its limitations.

How the narration treats Garrodigh’s inner life is another point of interest. This dragon has three remaining heads, but the book is told exclusively from the perspective of Centerhead, who seems more in touch with reality than the perpetually hungry Bottomhead, who has no interest in complicated ideas and prefers to follow more animalistic urges, and the delusional Upperhead, who is horrified at dragon behavior and is convinced that he’s a human trapped in a bad dream. The constant disagreements between Garrodigh’s heads, with Centerhead almost always taking the role of the mediating and decision-making personality, can be read as a creative reinterpretation of the Freudian trinity of Id/Ego/Superego, with the missing four head serving as Garrodigh’s life-defining trauma, the symbolic castration in reference to which everything else is framed.

(Another possible reading of Garrodigh’s heads would view them as representing the fractured self that emerges in cases of dissociative disorders, with Bottomhead’s and Upperhead’s maladaptive coping mechanisms, as well as their selective amnesia, having developed to protect the primary identity from its life-defining trauma.)

(YET another possible reading of Garrodigh’s personality would use a Lacanian lens. The primordial Lack of the fourth head is what drives Garrodigh’s every goal and choice, and his inner conflict isn’t resolved until a later chapter where he crosses an ocean, facing the thing that can kill him. Here I should be careful not to spoil too much, but the turning point in this part of his journey is that he recovers a lost Archetypal Mother at the same time as he helps humans recover a lost Archetypal Father, an encounter that reconciles Garrodigh with both the order of nature and the order of society.)

Interestingly, with all the details the book provides on Garrodigh’s mind, it never mentions how dragons experience (or not) desire. This omission stands out because the narration goes out of its way to make a recurring joke about Centerhead’s bafflement at human sexual habits, and these moments showcase how humans can look outright alien when viewed at a distance. The human Rania, Garrodigh’s self-appointed rider, caretaker and confidant, has a head-spinningly convoluted love life that the reader only gets to see as filtered through the dragon’s inevitably inaccurate perception.

On the human side, things are no less complicated. Rania is an immigrant in the dragon rider city, a native of another kingdom with which her new home is at war. Some of her superiors expect her to simply fulfill her duty and fight, but others mistrust her by default and question the truthfulness of her sworn loyalty. These questions about belonging and acceptance mirror Garrodigh’s own dilemma regarding his place among humans: he hates them and wants to eat them all, but he’s unexpectedly met a human community where dragons are valued and cared for. Neither Rania nor Garrodigh see any reason to expect they’ll end up being loved, and finding exactly that will be the final test of their respective characters.

The Dragon Has Some Complaints continues Wiswell’s literary exploration of what we mean by the category “monster” and what we do to beings that label is applied to. Sometimes prejudice makes us eschew any attempt at communication, and sometimes we wish nothing more than to open up to each other, but never learned what to do if such connection succeeds. If you’ve ever felt it’s dangerous to open your mouth, imagine having three.

Nerd Coefficient: 8/10.

Reference: Wiswell, John. The Dragon Has Some Complaints [DAW, 2026].

POSTED BY: Arturo Serrano, multiclass Trekkie/Whovian/Moonie/Miraculer, accumulating experience points for still more obsessions.

Wednesday, June 17, 2026

Film Review: Masters of the Universe (2026)

Lighthearted nostalgic adventure that doesn't take itself too seriously

Saturday mornings in the ‘80s were a sacred time for fantasy loving kids, a time when they could indulge in a range of fantastical animated adventures. Some cartoons were available in the after school hours as well. Long before cable gave us 24-hour kids and cartoon channels, and before streaming services gave us on-demand access to thousands of superhero shows, weekend and after school cartoons were the primary gateway to adventure. Among the curated selection of kids cartoons was He-Man and the Masters of the Universe. The series, based on an existing toy brand, gave kids the animated version of action figures from Mattel’s Masters of the Universe collection. In full disclosure, I will note that I am not a He-Man (or spinoff She-Ra) superfan, although I watched some of both original shows in their original runs and have sometimes watched other iterations of the series, including Netflix’s She-Ra reboot. I mention this because the 2026 Masters of the Universe feels very intentionally grounded in that original sense of childhood nostalgia. Depending on your perspective, you may find this a joyous relief or an irritation. For me, despite the film’s many shortcomings, I mostly found it to be the former: a fun, optimistic surprise in a sea of otherwise perfectly appropriate and timely cinema bleakness and intensity.

In the 2026 adventure, Adam is the young prince of Eternia, a magical kingdom with talking animals and sorcerers. He is small for his age and hesitant to fight. As a result, he is pushed around by the other kids in their weapons training sessions and looked down on by his father the king. Despite this, he is friends with his strong friend Teela and is encouraged by his teacher, Teela’s dad, the head soldier Duncan. Adam’s home is Castle Grayskull, home to a sacred sword of power and protected by a mage known as the Sorceress. When the evil sorcerer Skeletor and his partner Evil-Lyn attack the castle, the king’s forces are overwhelmed. The queen, who is from Earth, is forced to send Adam and the sword to safety through a portal to Earth. But in the fall to Earth, Adam loses the sword. Suddenly (one time skip later), fifteen years have passed and Adam is going on Tinder dates and working in HR in Oklahoma City. Despite his average life, he is obsessed with memories of his home planet (although no one believes him) and is determined to regain his lost sword. When he finally finds it, it triggers an attack by a fantastical creature, which leads to a rescue by his now grown-up friend Teela, who takes him back to Eternia. Adam must use the sword and his own inner strength to rescue his parents, free his people, and retake his kingdom from Skeletor.

The major strength of this film is the lead actors. Nicholas Galitzine is believable and enjoyable as a likeable but insecure everyman who knows he’s destined for more than the drudgery of his day job. Camila Mendes, who did several seasons as Veronica in Riverdale, is excellent as the no-nonsense, sharp, grown-up-in-the-room in all of the scenes. Idris Elba is, as always, perfect as Duncan, who ranges from tough teacher to substitute father figure to defeated and depressed drunk to fierce soldier. Kristen Wiig is also funny as Duncan’s sarcastic robot companion. There is even a Dolph Lundgren cameo, where the former He-Man actor gives Nicholas Galitzine some cryptic advice about the way to be a hero.

There are many funny moments in this film, including the opening scene where Adam is telling his complicated life story to his eyerolling blind date. Although not all of the jokes hit, the story is, for the most part, amusing and very kid-friendly. Unlike other superhero live-action films, Masters of the Universe opts for comedy and camp as its primary tone. The choice is a bit unexpected in this age of edgy superhero interpretations that are either grim or cynical. Masters of the Universe is closer to the tone of the Barbie movie or the live-action One Piece series. But it opts out of Barbie’s cerebral social commentary sarcasm or One Piece’s balance of outrageousness and grim intensity. It’s most similar in tone to the 2017 live-action Power Rangers, a film that tried to balance a modern, edgy aesthetic with classic, campy, kids show nostalgia. Power Rangers was a film that started off edgy/cool in the first half and then jarringly dove into campy kids nerdiness in the second half. However, Masters of the Universe has a clear target audience and vibe in mind, and stays consistent in its tone of lightness, kid-friendly playfulness and self-aware nostalgia.

In fact, the film is very self-aware of its campy nostalgia. Adam reps the old Prince Adam outfit by wearing a pink button-down shirt and jeans in his non-He-Man scenes. He repeatedly acknowledges the goofiness of some of the things he says or does, admitting that many of his choices are based on a child’s worldview and childhood memories he wants to reconnect with. Although he is an adult, it is clear he is emotionally stuck in his childhood trauma, loss, and insecurity. In the original He-Man animated series, Adam’s fearful or lackadaisical attitude was an artificial cover for his alternate identity. In Masters of the Universe, he has genuine hesitation and insecurities. And when he transforms, everyone around him knows he’s the same person with the same insecurities. This evolution of the premise is an asset to the story, to humanize both him and his connection to his friends. And it avoids the always annoying trope of close friends not noticing that the hero and their clearly identical alter ego are the same person.

However, despite the appeal of the story and the fun tone, there are some elements of the film that are confusing. Given the intentional and thoughtful characterization of Adam, it’s odd to leave out any reference to his childhood upbringing on Earth. He talks about life on Eternia as if it is the only thing he knows. In other lost prince/princess stories, we get at least a quick explanation of their survival. Superman was adopted by the Kents; Emma from Once Upon a Time was raised in foster homes in the U.S. The absence of even a passing explanation for his survival was a distracting plot omission that felt like a missed opportunity to give this Oklahoman Adam some personal context. His bestie and roommate Hussein is a likeable but underused character who mostly disappears from the plot without an opportunity to get to know about his connection to Adam. Another strange choice is an extended detour into Adam’s day job at a human relations company where his obsession with swords gets him in trouble. There is a particularly protracted scene of his boss (an excellent Sasheer Zamata) lecturing him on sensitivity in a way that paints her as a semi-villain (she seems almost like a corporate counterpart to Evil-Lyn), and the scene is clearly meant to mock corporate sensitivity lingo. The fact that a consent joke is twice used as a derisive punchline is another strange choice. Later in a crucial moment on Eternia, Adam initially opts for negotiation and empathy when everyone wants him to fight, but he is soon forced to abandon that approach in favor of fighting. This throughline is a confusing theme in a film that is otherwise fun, optimistic, and likeable.

Like many films lately, Masters of the Universe is at least thirty minutes too long, especially for something that is primarily a comedy adventure. It is a film that has plenty of kid-friendly content and doesn’t take itself too seriously. The very last scenes and the first post-credits scene emphasize this lightheartedness with a big homage to the original 1980s cartoon in its final send-off. Although it deals with themes of empathy versus aggression and self-confidence versus insecurity, the overall story is mainly a fun reminder of childhood imagination and adventure. Depending on your mood, that may be just what you need.

Nerd Coefficient: 7/10.

Highlights:

  • Self-aware nostalgia
  • Solid acting
  • Kid-friendly content and humor

POSTED BY: Ann Michelle Harris – Multitasking, fiction writing Trekkie currently dreaming of her next beach vacation.

Friday, March 6, 2026

Book Review: Green and Deadly Things by Jenn Lyons

A standalone fantasy novel by Jenn Lyons, set in a new fantasy verse of necromancy, knights and old secrets and powers.


Mathaiik, as I like to say in many of these reviews, has a problem. He has several problems. First, he wants to be a knight, one of the Idallik Knights. But he has never been able to manifest a magical weapon, which has kept him from that rank. Also, he has a very strange and unique connection to plants, one that becomes even more intense when the nearby forest seems to be waking up, featuring a trio of plant-like queens. Even before the queens, he was on the outs and distrusted because of his nature. And, this is far different than the threats the knights were born to face. So what are these plant based threats? Are they the vanguard or allies of their hostile neighbors, the Kaliri? A sign of the necromancy that the knights have been fighting? Or something else?

Math doesn’t know the answers, but he does try and act when danger strikes. Math makes a deadly alliance and a bond with a magician buried in a magical tomb, and finds that most of the truths he knows about magic and the world are completely and utterly wrong. And that this is coming just as the world and the conflicts within it are set to turn to a new and deadly phase.

This is the story of Jenn Lyons’ standalone fantasy novel Green and Deadly Things.

Green and Deadly Things runs on a few rails. We start with Math as our point of view character throughout the book. As a result we get a character who is on the outs, but desperately wants to be a knight, to be a hero, to be a protector. This sort of duty and honor is not an abstract characteristic with Math, either. There are a group of children at the base where Math is struggling to become a knight, and their protection, throughout the book, is something always on Math’s mind and he takes action again and again in order to protect them. Math is not a perfect character, but Lyons time and again presents him in a heroic light, even if he doesn’t think he has the abilities of a hero. And it turns out that he’s wrong about that, too.

The worldbuilding and overarching world is a deep and interesting world, a feature of Lyons’ previous works here in full flower. Lyons has a real balancing act here for the reader and she manages it: she has to convey to a new reader what they think and how they think the world work, with necromancy, knights, and the wild and weird forest. And then, even as the book conveys the world, it also has to make the turn to show that what Math and most of the world thinks is absolutely wrong. And that is done by Kaiataris. Kaiataris is what Math thinks of as a Grim Lord, a necromancer from an earlier age that should all be dead and gone. So, in a desperate attempt to save himself and those he cares about in a forest gone into a rampage, Math manages to unlock the tomb where Kai has been sleeping, and wakes her up. And, accidentally, forms a magical bond with her. And Kai, being from the far past, a different age of the world, has a very different view of magic, and uses a very different magical paradigm. There is a real delight, in that Kai doesn’t understand how Math does magic even as Math is stunned by Kai’s abilities and nature¹.

And the rest of the worldbuilding is rich and deep as well. We do get a whistle-stop tour of the regions behind the forest where we start, and Lyons does enjoy enriching her world. There are trains (hence the whistle-stop reference), teleportation circles, and ancient secrets. We get dangerous adversarial nations, ancient ruins, intrigues within factions of the knights and much more. Its a complicated and rich world, and Lyons gives us enough information and pulls back the fog of war the world to provide a world that seems as rich as the Chorus of Dragons world, but in a more compact space. This is a world that I could see more novels and stories set in, but this story is a more distilled and concentrated presentation than the more luxurious, expansive series. And, this novel is written explicitly and directly as a standalone and one and done story that gives satisfactory endings to the characters and their relationships. The novel goes from a local problem, to, quite logically and in easy steps, the fate of the world, with the largest possible stakes.

Relationships and the connections between characters helps drive plot and action throughout the novel as those stakes rise. While the novel stays in the point of view of Math throughout, Lyons does a solid job in giving us characterization and development on both sides of his relationships. His affection and caring for the children of the fort. The love of his sister. The rivalries and personal antagonistic relationships with some of his fellow knights, too, get full character arcs and development. It’s a rich web and tapestry of characters and how they interact, and she does well in tying this to the major overarching plots.

Oh, and speaking of relationships, there is a very slow burn romance. As it turns out Kaiataris, as the novel unfolds, has a slow growth of her relationship with Math throughout the novel. The growth of their relationship, warts and all, is one of the chassis of the book, but it doesn’t feel tacked on or perfunctory, as they so often can be in an epic fantasy. Instead, Lyons has it as a natural avenue for character growth, for Math and Kai alike. They are very different people, a would-be knight, and a sorceress, put under pressure and trial and learning to care for each other. There are some very funny moments, and some very tender moments, and seeing Math and Kai trying to figure out their relationship, through and beyond the bond, is excellent and affective and effective writing.

The pacing and scales of the novel, finally, shows the deft hand of the author. We go from an incident in a forest border fort, range across the world, contract the action when needed to a small scale tight focus and expand out again. Lyons has a great affection for this world, be it a dangerous forest, one of the largest libraries in the world (and the fact that Math loves libraries is not lost on me as a reader), ancient ruins (such as the one that we find Kai), ballrooms, or expanses of deadly desert. Lyons loves to follow up quiet moments with furious, kinetic action. I was entertained at every stage and “one more chapter” sense is strong in her writing.

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Highlights

  • rich epic fantasy in one volume
  • interesting and dynamic character development and relationships
  • page turning and enthralling writing.

Reference: Lyons, Jenn, Green and Deadly Things, [Tor Books, 2026]

¹ The paradigm and comparison I kept going to, although it is not exact, is the stories of Aahz and Skeeve by Robert Asprin (Another Fine Myth and sequels). This would make Kai as Aahz and Math as Skeeve. Skeeve didn’t know what he was doing, and needed Aahz’s help, who had lost his magic and had lots of knowledge, but not any power. 


POSTED BY: Paul Weimer. Ubiquitous in Shadow, but I'm just this guy, you know? @princejvstin.

Friday, January 2, 2026

Book Review: The Gryphon King by Sara Omer

A monster-filled secondary-world fantasy that takes its cues and worldbuilding inspirations from points east of the Bosporus Strait

In a world of Khans and khanates, opulent city states and dreaming complacent kingdoms, Sara Omer’s The Gryphon King revolves around the driven desires of Bataar, the man who would be the titular Gryphon King as his ambitions and desires run up against a kingdom and its formidable women. One of them, Nohra, has worked hard to be one of the Harpy Knights, given one of the powerful weapons of her kingdom; and she rides and cares for her carnivorous pegasus, Mercy. Quite frankly, Nohra would rather be flying and defending the throne. But when Bataar shockingly and suddenly conquers her kingdom of Dumakra as part of his very successful campaign for universal conquest of the continent, Nohra finds herself nearly a hostage in the palace, a Harpy Knight chained to the whims of the Steppe Conqueror. She is definitely interested in getting rid of Bataar and restoring her homeland. But in the midst of courtly politics, intrigue and trying to walk a fine line with Bataar, strange things have been happening in the Kingdom. Monsters are afoot… and not just the titular Gryphons, either. Nohra and Bataar find themselves the unlikeliest of reluctant allies.

This is how the novel thus unfolds:

We have an interesting set of flawed characters, with secrets, lies, and hidden agendas, drawn into uneasy alliances and conflicts. Bataar and Nohra are our sole point-of-view characters, except for a chapter at the end featuring a character about whom any talk is extremely spoilery, so I will leave them out of the discussion. In addition to the monsters, I wonder whether this character is more of a central axis of the novel and the trilogy than one might first expect. Bataar, despite being a capable warlord, a cunning strategist, and a clever ruler, is arrogant, and way too often puts himself right in the front line of danger. Nohra, despite being a Harpy Knight, has some rather large blind spots, and she is sometimes overfocused on her goals and misses the bigger picture. Qaira, Bataar’s wife and political right hand, seems to have scheming plans of her own that neither Bataar nor Nohra suspect. Other intrigues fill out the narrative. Having conquered Dumakra, Bataar has set himself a whole host of headaches. This provides plenty of drama for the reader in between the more bloody conflicts.

What I really want to talk about, of course, if you have read any of my reviews, is the worldbuilding and the structure of the book. This is epic fantasy, clear to the vein, but there are notes of grimdark and darker fantasy in here. One of the comps given in the promo kit is Hannah Kaner’s Godkiller, and I think that is a good book to tie this to. It’s not full-on grimdark, even if, as noted above, we have a whole raft of flawed characters whose motivations, secrets and desires leave us with no clear white and black hats. It’s definitely taking notes from grimdark, showing the influence of that subgenre on the main body of epic fantasy. The courtly intrigue and very rich worldbuilding put me in the mind of a more straightforward Jenn Lyons. No footnotes, and playing with reference and metafiction, but keep the very rich empire and complicated characters. Samantha Shannon, in The Priory of the Orange Tree mode, also feels like a book and author that has kinship with this one.

But the world itself is what fascinates me. Omer has described herself as taking notes from the Ottoman Empire, and there is definitely the courtly intrigue, including among wives and concubines, that you’d find in, say, Magnificent Century.¹ Also the decor, the social relations, the descriptions of palaces and spaces, all point to, as I said above, cultural and social touchstones east of the Bosporus, toward Anatolia, Armenia, Persia and Central Asia. The physiogeographic setup of the continent is varied, ranging from the steppe that Bataar comes from to the dry desert realm that dominates Dumakra, and high mountains as well. There is a map, but I admit that I have strong questions about the river setup on the map and the geology of the continent as a result.

But returning to the cultural worldbuilding: I think, especially with Bataar and his steppe origins, the feeling I kept getting was not the Ottomans at all, but rather Timur the Lame. Tamerlane was a Turkic-Mongol warlord of the 14th century. Born on the steppe, like Bataar, he was injured at a young age, again, like Bataar. Tamerlane got the steppe tribes to unite under him to go on campaign. Same with Bataar, although that part of his story gets skipped over; we go from his formative fight with a gryphon to him off conquering.

Tamerlane had a wide set of military victories against a variety of opponents. Bataar seems a little less cruel than Tamerlane (who was very cruel, so don’t be deceived here), but is no less ambitious and expansive, and clearly is “punching above his weight” in taking on polities that he really shouldn’t. Both men want to conquer the world, and Tamerlane did a pretty good job at it, and in the first few chapters until he reaches Dumakra, Bataar is doing an excellent job, and is eager to continue his conquest. Granted, in our world, Tamerlane didn’t have to deal with carnivorous pegasi and worse, but the military genius, the fluidity of his responses, and the determination are all things I see in Bataar.

But yes, going to the fantastic, this novel is full of monsters. The pegasi and gryphons in this world, besides being strong and ferocious with beak and claws, also carry a debilitating and sometimes deadly infection if you are scratched by them. There are aquatic monsters as well, and then there are the ghouls. The ghouls are nasty and dangerous, and remind me of the ghuls in Saladin Ahmed’s Tower of the Crescent Moon. And fittingly, like those, they are found in a set of ruins our main characters camp in—and really, really shouldn’t have. This goes back to the flawed characters, and how Omer effectively uses their weaknesses to help drive the plot, again and again. They might be competent, strong and talented, but they have feet of clay.

There is definitely magic and mayhem (and even a hint of Gunpowder Empire) to the magic and the weapons that the Harpy Knights wield, as well as other magical items that show up. Omer is tapping into cultural touchstones that have rarely gotten play as the center. Places like Dumakra and the Steppe of Bataar’s homeland have, if they have been shown on screen in fantasy novels, often been places visited rather than the focus. And when we do see Southwestern Asian fantasy, it’s often been hundreds of years before, in the Caliphate, rather than the Timurid and Ottoman Empires. The Mughals, a couple of centuries ahead, and some distance east, seem to be also finally getting their due as inspiration for cultures, societies, characters, and worldbuilding. There is a rich vein here that Omer is mining for plenty of untapped potential. I find it interesting that her “Europe” analogue, Aglea, is off screen to the far north of the map. Omer is exactly inverting the tropes of the Great Wall of Europe by having the “Europeans” be the area only seen on a map and of much lesser importance.

There is one other thing I want to mention about The Gryphon King, which you may have picked up on already. The book is neither marketed as, nor actually is, the hot new invented category of romantasy. It’s firmly and apologetically widescreen secondary-world fantasy, and while there are all sorts of dynastic and court politics, schemes of succession and ownership based on marriage alliances, concubinages and the like, this novel does not fit in the romantasy category in the least. Just to make sure, since I seem to see every fantasy novel written by a woman labeled as “romantasy” these days, I looked back at the publicity for the book. It is, in fact, not. That is not to say that there isn’t a loving and clever marriage in here, as well as characters plotting for such marriages, and various characters finding each other attractive. But the focus of the novel is on more sociopolitical relationships, and sibling relationships, and, of course, the monsters.

If you want courtly intrigue, adventure, politics, and a large helping of man-eating monsters, based on Medieval Southwestern Asian motifs and cultural touchstones, The Gryphon King is definitely for you. It’s the first book in a series, and it only comes to a stopping point, but with a very appropriate hinge. I look forward to more in Omer’s world and characters.

Highlights:

  • #teamgryphon
  • Strong use of Southwest Asia as inspiration for setting and character detail
  • NOT romantasy: epic fantasy with notes of grimdark and plenty of intrigue
  • Richly written, with an excellent eye for detail

Reference: Omer, Sara. The Gryphon King [Titan Books, 2025].

¹ A Turkish TV historical drama that tells the story of Suleiman the Magnificent, Ottoman ruler, and his wife Hurrem, former slave girl. I came across this show last year by complete accident (someone in a seat in a plane in front of me was watching it, I took a screenshot and eventually figured it out). It's hugely popular in the Middle East but much less well known here. Which, frankly, if Netflix or the like got wind of it, an American version would come out, yesterday. Complicated, crafty and fascinating.  Think of it as I, Claudius, except for Suleiman, and you're there.

POSTED BY: Paul Weimer. Ubiquitous in Shadow, but I'm just this guy, you know? @princejvstin

Thursday, October 23, 2025

Book Review: The Nameless Land by Kate Elliott

Elen’s story continues and finishes in a land of lost magic, royal intrigue and much more

The Nameless Land is the second half of the duology started in The Witch Roads. The setup of the book as described in the first one holds: Deputy courier Elen winds up escorting a royal prince to the north, but things do not quite go as planned, with intrigue, conflict and revelations about Elen’s extra-empire origins in the final chapter.

And so we continue on with her story. The novel really can’t be taken on its own; it really is pretty much written as a second half. While there are references, now and again, back to events in the first book (especially in times of explanation), the novel relies on you having the preceding situation freshly in mind in order to fully appreciate the intricacy of the plotting. That also makes it difficult to recount the specifics of this novel without a lot of foreground explanation.

So let it be said that the scheming and intrigues of the first novel, between and within the Royal Court, as well as the provinces of the Empire, get an additional factor, as Elen and the others find themselves heading into territory only Elen knows—lands outside the Empire itself, her origins. So, in this half of the duology. Elliott expands the physical playground by introducing new societies, characters and conflicts. She does a great job in hooking them into the existing worldbuilding and further complicating the plot. Elliott loves to contrast how the Empire does things versus those (and there are multiple values of that) who handle a world where the Pall is a threat. Elen’s extra-empire origins, a secret she has mostly held from everyone (even Kem), become extremely important in the main thrust of this book. Through her unexpected return to her roots, we get a rich sense of someone who has a perspective on what she’s seeing that she doesn’t always share with her compatriots, but shares with the reader.

Also, once again, we have some small sections from the Imperial investigator Luviara, providing an outside perspective here and there. And once again, Elliott shows that more characters than just the protagonist(s) can have their own arcs and developments. We find out what Luviara has really been up to all this time, and why. I must say,as much as I love Elliott’s worldbuilding, her mastery of character may be even better and stronger.

As a result of all this material that we get, the classic “stop asking questions and start answering them” rubric for this book in terms of its placement doesn’t quite fit the duology as a whole as one might expect if these were two separate books rather than one book split into two. What this means is that there’s a lot of run-up, especially counting the first book’s narrative, to the point that, when the final revelations of what is going on and what is to be done become clear, and Elen and the others are forced into decisive final action, it is a timebomb that goes off with explosive speed and power and narrative compression. This is not to say that nothing happens, but there is a continual slow burn, and bursts of action, up to when everything goes off. Elliott has plotted both novels very carefully and pays off the promises made way back at the beginning of The Witch Roads.

In keeping with that, Elliott has the space, will and interest to continue to explore her fascinating set of characters and include new ones. The universe is queer, diverse, with many women in varying kinds of power, and at the same time, thanks to the Empire, has a chance to criticize various abuses and frames of power, including patriarchal ones. Readers of the first book will see that Elen’s nephew Kem’s story and their attempt to hold onto and make their own destiny and autonomy are a strong strand within this book. Also, looking at the novel as half of a single work, one can also see that the story of Elen is, in the end, a romance. But to say more about that would be spoilery. Readers of the first book can be assured, however, that the second book does return to the romance of the first novel, unexpectedly but delightfully.

The novel doesn’t quite explain everything in the plot and background explicitly and completely, and does leave a lot of wonder and mystery in the playground of the imagination. We do get some answers and a rough sense of why things are as they are, as far as the characters know them. The reader can piece together a little more of the background of the world that the characters miss, but there is still plenty of mystery left in this world.

The obvious pairing for this book is another duology: The Witch King and Queen Demon by Martha Wells. Both are interrogating imperial societies, one pair as a resistance to a hegemon, and the others as people living in a quite flawed one—but one that has a purpose given the dangers of the world around them with the Pall¹. Both interrogate gender and gender roles within a narrative, although Elliott is far, far more direct about it than Wells. Both of the books feature fascinating worldbuilding, with a setting that doesn’t stand still. Here Wells has the better of it hopping in time and space with Kai in both books. Elliott, on the other hand, has a character with a wider perspective, but the considerations of past societies are as overhangs and problems of the past affecting and poisoning the present. Both novels, moreover, talk about the uses of history and narrative and how misunderstanding what happened in the past can lead to issues in the present. The novels aren’t quite in dialogue with each other, since they were written contemporaneously. However, in a time and age when questions about power, empire, control, gender, autonomy and more are prevalent in our society, The Nameless Land takes its place with The Witch Roads, and with Wells’s novels, among others, in exploring these themes and concerns of our society, our moment—and beyond.

I know there will be at least one more story set in this fascinating universe. Once again, Elliott has paired characters with a deep and fascinating setting, and while Elen’s story is clearly finished here, there is still much to see and many more potential stories to tell in this world. And the geopolitical situation at the end of this novel is significantly changed compared to the start. Elliott’s worlds are never static and never go status quo ante. I’m sure that will influence what comes out in any subsequent story. I look forward to reading it, and more of them.

Highlights:

  • Ably completes the second half of the single story
  • Much more detail about Elen’s homeland
  • Strong character-focused narrative
  • Alas, still no live Griffins!

Reference: Elliott, Kate. The Nameless Land [Tor, 2025].

¹ Given the other two societies we see in the novel and how they handle the Pall and its threat, is the Empire the best of a bad set of choices for dealing with it? I think Elliott is deliberately showing us a variety of possibilities here, and that there is no definitive best society. But even given it being terrible in many ways, I think the Empire is a preferable society for the average person to live in.

POSTED BY: Paul Weimer. Ubiquitous in Shadow, but I’m just this guy, you know? @princejvstin.

Wednesday, September 24, 2025

Book Review: Queen Demon by Martha Wells

The story of Kai, Ziede, and the humans and others in Martha Wells’s rich secondary fantasy world continues

Queen Demon drops us right into the action without preamble or prologue or recap.¹ This novel, like its predecessor, is set both in the present and in the past, something that surprised me. However, unlike in the previous novel, the past portions of this one don’t range across the entire life of Kai; rather, they are more narrowly focused, and to thematic effect. In the past, Kai is ramping up to be part of the ultimate struggle against the Hierarchs, the oppressive empire bent on world conquest and conversion to their way of life.² The first book, Witch King, jumped “around” the actual fall of the Hierarchs and how people came together to defeat them. This had the effect of the present day being purely aftermath and the actual rise and fall not as detailed as it might be. This novel takes a look at that portion of Kai’s history. It’s an important and long story of its own, and I see why Wells didn’t even go into it in the first novel, and instead showcased that entire important story here, although I can see how that might have frustrated readers of Witch King.

As for the portions set in the present, it’s about 60 years afterwards. The Hierarchs are beaten, driven away. But their remnants might yet linger, and what of their lost power? Can it be salvaged and used? Does it need to be sealed up even more firmly, like capping an oil well? And what are the costs and risks of doing either of those things? Kai gets caught up in one of his companions’ quest to find the Well, and the consequences of doing so.

So, while Witch King is a variety of things, ranging from a “coming of age” to “coming together to fight an oppressor” combined with a mystery and slow unveiling of Kai and his world, Queen Demon assumes you know all this and are ready for another installment. If we are thinking in musical terms, Witch King was the opening movement in the symphony, introducing us to what Wells is cooking up here. But Queen Demon is different. Queen Demon shows us some nuanced aspects of Kai’s theme, seeing just how difficult it is to get a diverse and often warring group of people to get together to face a common threat. Wells makes this subtext explicit by having Kai and his core companions realize that that is the power of the Hierarchs and their empire—they are counting on the their opponents’ inability to unite their powers effectively. So Past Kai’s goal and mission is to do that. His special focus as the novel progresses are the dust witches, who do not trust the others at all, and are in fact a threat in and of themselves. Kai has a lot of work to do in order to get them on his side. He might have beaten a couple of the Hierarchs already, but it takes more than a village to defeat an authoritarian regime backed by a Power.

In the other part of this movement of the symphony, in the present, Dahin, one of Kai’s oldest friends, is determined to find the source of the Hierarchs’ power. This theme in the symphony is concerned heavily with the costs and needs and necessities of power. One might say that the past narrative thread, as already discussed, is all about political and social power, how to accumulate it, concentrate it, and use it for good. The present-day thread is more concerned with the costs of magical power. We get plenty of detail in both threads, but especially the present day, about Kai’s power and what it costs him to use cantrips and intentions, the two main types of magical “spells”.

There are other ways to get that power, and understanding it and its cost in the case of the Hierarch’s Well is Dahin’s focus, and his obsession is what drags Kai, Ziede and company in a quest to find the Hierarch’s power source. After all, if the Well still exists, someone might resurrect their project. The power from the Well seems bottomless (at perhaps an even higher cost), and the lure and temptation are very real indeed. Kai begins to suspect, as the present-day narrative goes on, that others rather than Dahin might be very interested in getting the power of the Well… and becoming new Hierarchs themselves.³

The past narrative is all about how the band got together to defeat the Hierarchs; there is no doubt that Kai will succeed, only how and what will it cost him and those around him. The present narrative, in a “what’s next?” way of pulling the reader forward, was at times more intriguing from a plotwise perspective—just what the heck is the deal with the Well? Why is Dahin so obsessed? And what are the other agendas in play here? The author does a great job in making the past and present narratives resonate and have their themes speak to each other across time, allowing for a rich, braided story.

This is the point where I pitch the Raksura novels to readers unaware of them. In the time between the end of the Ile-Rien novels and her phoenix-like fulmination and rise with Murderbot, Wells wrote a number of things, some of which are coming back to print. My favorite of those are the novellas (and a couple of novels) of the Raksura sequence. They’re not in the same setting as the Rising World,⁴ but a rich secondary fantasy world of its own. Our main character Moon is a shapeshifting Raksura, who, at the beginning of The Cloud Roads (first in the series), doesn’t even know who or what he really is, only to hide his nature. The story of The Cloud Roads is for Moon to find his people, to uneasily make a place among them. The rest of the stories are their adventures as the Raksura eventually return to their homeland, and the threats, opportunities, friends, enemies, allies and wonders to be found there.

The Rising World novels and the books of the Raksura (or the Three Worlds, as they are called internally) have a lot in common: rich secondary world fantasy, full of characters and relationships (often thorny); a layered universe with a deep history that can come rising to the surface, for good or for ill; a focused point of view on a character who often is, or feels like, an outsider. What’s more, both Kai and Moon are not human, but often have to live among humans, deal with humans, and come to terms with humanity (or humanoids in the case of the Raksura).

Readers of Queen Demon who love the action and adventure against the Hierarchs and their remnants, both past and present, are going to love the Raksura books and stories, the struggles against the Fell, exploring ancient ruins, dealing with dread magics. Readers of these two novels who love the interdynamics of Kai and Ziede, of the cultures where Kai lives throughout his long demonic life, will love the thorny interpersonal relationships of the clans of Raksura, both within and between clans.

As good as the Three Worlds/Raksura series is, and I love it to pieces,⁵ I think that the Rising World books further exercise and strengthen Wells’s secondary world fantasy skills and are even better written. These books are very different from the Murderbot series: even with a narrow point of view, they feel much more expansive than the tight, snarky in-the-mind of Murderbot that we get in their books.⁶ It will take a gear shift for readers who came to Wells for Murderbot to try the Rising World (or the Raksura series), but I sure think it is worthwhile. Wells has a lot of arrows in her quiver, and with Queen Demon, continues to hone the arrow of secondary world fantasy.

The book is a nice and full pair to the first novel, Witch King, but the ending of this one leaves a big open door for further books set in the Rising World. It’s a big setting, there’s a lot out there, and we’ve not explored every inch of Kai’s history. I would love to continue Kai’s story, especially since this post-Hierarch world and its struggles covers something rarely seen: what happens after you defeat the big bad and seal evil back in the can. Happily Ever After takes work to avoid backsliding. Queen Demon, in its present tense, starts to tackle that problem, but it is far from barely beginning. More, please!

Highlights:

  • Continues the story of Kai, Ziede and the Rising World ’verse
  • Important themes about how to come to together to defeat evil, as well as what happens afterwards, showing an important part of Kai’s life not seen in the first book
  • Shows the range of the writer beyond the popular confines of the Murderbot ’verse.

Reference: Wells, Martha. Queen Demon [Tor Books, 2025].

¹ I’ve lamented about this before and I do think that this novel could have used it. It had been a minute since I read Witch King, and while Ziede and Kai and the Hierarchs’ threat were fresh and permanent in my mind, the other characters and other setup of the book were less certain. And yes, this means you cannot really start the series here. You will be lost. There are some references dropped in here and there, but the novel assumes you know what Kai and Ziede are, and the geopolitical setup, as well as some basic facts about Demons and Witches. If you don't know who the Saredi are, or that Witches are descended from Demons and humans, then you are going to be lost and miss some important beats.

² The Hierarchs and their methods and structure remind me of a more magically focused Palliseen (from the Adrian Tchaikovsky books): implacable empire, with an ideology, but in this case backed by a Power.

³ Having a Power backing your magic puts me in mind of the Amber diceless roleplaying game (Pattern, Logrus, etc). If that reference is too obscure, consider 5e warlocks and their pact bonds. Now imagine them pacting to a place of power rather than to a being, and you can see how the Hierarchs work.

⁴ I’ve given this serious thought as a worldbuilder, without actually asking Wells. If the Raksura shared the same setting with the Rising World, it’d have to be on the far side of the planet, on another continent, but the magic systems and lines of power do not correspond. I think the history of the Rising World forestalls it being the same setting.

⁵ I’ve mentioned before that I might not be a fanfic writer, but I borrow ideas and things from books to put into my TTRPGs. The Raksura and Fell wound up in a TTRPG scenario I ran, sticking them in the old Forbidden City Module. The PCs wound up getting caught up in their conflict.

⁶ Rapport: Friendship, Solidarity, Communion, Empathy is a new novelette that breaks this, and gives us a point of view entirely divorced from Murderbot’s.

POSTED BY: Paul Weimer. Ubiquitous in Shadow, but I’m just this guy, you know? @princejvstin.

Friday, August 15, 2025

Book Review: The Raven Scholar by Antonia Hodgson

An epic fantasy that provides new twists and avenues for familiar genre conventions

Class and social distinctions. Longstanding grudges and plans within plans. Unusual use of point of view, including an effective omniscient and at first unexplained points of view. Strong grounding in personal relationships. Unexpected revelations.

These are the themes and tropes of Antonia Hodgson's The Raven Scholar.

The bare bones of the story, laid out, would not seem out of place in a lot of fantasy novels. The whole idea of a "country mouse" going to the city and trying to thrive there against all odds is one that goes back at least to the Roman Empire, and probably a lot earlier, too. Our titular Raven Scholar, Neema Kraa, is just that.

But the novel keeps us off balance right from the beginning. Neema is a side character for the opening of the book, and in fact does not appear in that opening or seems to have any importance, at first. The opening revolves around a mother and her two children under the equivalent of house arrest since the father led a bloody insurrection. The Emperor gives the male child a choice, and sets off a chain of events that runs through the center of the book. The female child undergoes a slow and painful death, the male child trains to try and succeed the Emperor, and our titular Raven Scholar is summoned to give a historic flourish to the decision.

Jump forward in time, and our Raven Scholar is a member of the court, although she is far more interested in her studies than courtly intrigue. Intrigue finds her, however, and by twist and turns, and unwilling response, she finds herself in a deadly competition to succeed the Emperor. The fact that her friend (and perhaps more than a friend) is also in this competition only heightens matters. And Neema is keeping secrets… as is everyone else in this competition and this court.

All this, with Neema trying just to do House Raven credit in the competition and not discredit it with a bad performance, would make for an effective and interesting novel. There are plenty of interesting and often tangled secrets, lies, betrayals, alliances and conflicts among the participants to succeed the Emperor (the Emperor is a selected, term-limited position). Even the backstory and secret intrigues that Neema and the reader are only slowly made aware of are part and parcel of what would normally be a fine and upstanding fantasy novel, one worth recommending if one likes the intrigue and schemes of a "deadly decadent court".

In addition, we get a novel that nearly bursts at the seams with rich worldbuilding detail. We learn a tremendous amount, fed to us in a steady stream, of the scheming Houses, long-standing social tensions, history, philosophy, literature and more of this world. While the action really is restricted to mainly one island where the Emperor lives, the world beyond that island feels visible, tangible and real.

And then there are the characters. We start with Neema, our titular Raven Scholar, our country mouse turned city mouse and dumped into the deep end, but her history and background turn out to be more complex than first indicated. This is also true (and sometimes surprising even to themselves) of all the contestants, the Emperor, and several secondary characters. Many of them have full-fledged character arcs, or the appearance of same: they hew and defy their Houses, and they are remarkably three-dimensional and human, uniformly. These are the kind of people you can imagine meeting for dinner and really having a sense of how they'd act. (looking at you, Cain! (but not JUST the scion of the Fox)).

The best way the novel handles this is in the trials and competition. The competition to become the next Emperor proceeds by a series of bouts and trials, one for each of the Houses. We get a sense of the characters from how they do in the trials… but also in the design of their own trials for the others. (One does not participate in their own trial, of course.) How Cain and the Foxes see the world and really are is seen in the Fox Trial, and Neema's Raven Trial is also illuminating, but even something like the Ox Trial shows that the steady and patient Oxen (including our Ox trial participant) are NOT the simpletons and fools that the rest of the Empire makes them out to be.

But where this novel really shines is in the extra it brings. The novel feels like it is in the tradition of a stratum of fantasy novels and stories in a mode that Jenn Lyons's A Chorus of Dragons series did not invent, but certainly is a strong and striking example of. The novel uses unusual points of view (including omniscient ones and ones whose provenance and nature are not explained at first) to give a wide kaleidoscope of what is going on. The novel sometimes feels like a slowly emerging picture from a jigsaw puzzle. Certainly, with a murder mystery on tap, that was going to be baked in, regardless. With all the moving pieces of the various factions, plots and plans, that was going to be the case. But the unusual and extra point of view lets the reader have more of a sense of what is going on than even the biggest characters, and with the social and literary commentary on the proceedings from within the world, The Raven Scholar really comes together as a stunning example of the form. It's on the low end of true doorstoppers (650 pages or so), but with all that is in here on offer, it feels longer still.

R. R. Virdi's Tales of Tremaine also sits in the same space as the Lyons series and what Hodgson is doing here in The Raven Scholar, as well. The slightly metafictional commentary on the nature of the story, as well as the stories within stories that all three series employ, seem to be part of a genre conversation on the nature of story that has always been there,¹ but has been getting more of it lately. Writers like Hodgson, Virdi, and Lyons are interrogating fantasy stories on multiple levels by using these sorts of devices.

I say, then, though, that The Raven Scholar is not a "101 book" for genre readers. If you have never read a fantasy novel in your life, starting your fantasy reading here is probably going to be an exercise in frustration and confusion.² Or at the very least, you won't get as much mileage out of the book as if you had already read some fantasy novels and were ready for the usual tropes and devices to be deployed and subverted.³ But if you are ready for that gear shift, The Raven Scholar is here as an excellent new book to explore this region of genre space.

Highlights:

  • Complex, complicated and intriguing epic fantasy
  • Excellent set of characters
  • Doorstopper: feature, not bug

Reference: Hodgson, Antonia. The Raven Scholar [Orbit, 2025].

¹ Take Scheherazade as an example. Or even The Odyssey, which has a lot more of Odysseus recounting things than you'd think. In fact, the whole bit about the Trojan horse is from the Odyssey, NOT the Iliad.

² The older science fiction model that comes to mind here is Dune (and whether or not Dune is really SF or just fantasy in SF garb is a whole other essay). But the points of view, the deep dives into character, the literary history, the framing of the Dune story, the subversion of tropes (sometimes so subtly that too many people don't even realize they are being subverted) are things that readers who have not read much SF can entirely miss.

³ In a different way, the metafictional books Long Live Evil by Sarah Rees Brennan and How to Become the Dark Lord and Die Trying by Django Wexler are doing that subversion, but from a much punchier populist angle rather than a literary one.

POSTED BY: Paul Weimer. Ubiquitous in Shadow, but I’m just this guy, you know? @princejvstin.

Friday, May 16, 2025

Book Review: Birth of a Dynasty: A Novel by Chinaza Bado

A rich and interesting start to an epic fantasy story that may not suit all readers.


I don’t normally put cautions or content warnings in my reviews, it's not been my general practice. But I am going to begin there, of all places, in my discussion of Birth of a Dynasty by Chinaza Bado because I think burying it would be a disservice to a reader. Birth of a Dynasty has violence and rather bad things happening to two child protagonists, ranging from death of their families to imprisonment in rather dire circumstances, violence against them directly, deadly violence committed by them, and other threats to their mental and physical well being. If that is your red line, this book may not be for you.

With that out of the way, let’s begin again as I normally would in a piece like this. Birth of a Dynasty: A Novel is an African infused and inspired location, setting and cultural matrix for a secondary fantasy world. There has been a slowly growing crop of epic fantasies with their roots in Africa, ever since I lamented their relative lack 15 or so years ago. Epic fantasies whose kingdoms, cultures, social structures are inspired by a part of world often just seen as the colonized, or the oppressed, or exoticized as a place to visit or hear stories about, rather than a power, a center of their own, worlds where African influenced cultures are the axis mundi of their secondary world. Evan Winter, Nisi Shawl, N. K. Jemisin, Marlon James and a slew of others have been exploring this space. Chiaza Bado is the latest.

Our two primary point of view characters do start as children. Let’s start with M’kuru. M’kuru is the youngest scion of the Mukundi family, a powerful and rich noble family in the kingdom. But his status starts to fall from the moment he comes onto the page. We see a vicious attack on his family and its holdings by representatives and envoys of the king. The author has taken to heart the idea of starting a novel with a “bang” as we are quickly plunged into a conflict. It is a conflict that we do not quite understand all that is going on or why, with young M’kuru in the middle of the storm.

And then his counterpart, Zikora. Like with M’kuru, Zikora is a child and the novel again does a good job of portraying a child protagonist. Like M’kuru, she lives a young and sheltered life, but is a bit of a wild child, and definitely willful. She wants nothing more than to train at arms and become a female warrior, even if she doesn’t quite understand what that means in her culture. We do get to see more of Zikora’s life, unlike M’kuru, before her own inciting incidents change her life forever.

There is a prophecy that the ruling Zenzele dynasty is worried about, that a union of scions of these two houses in particular will bring down their kingdom. In true fashion for such stories, the book opens with the Zenzele making that aforementioned vicious attack to wipe out the Mukundi entirely to prevent this from happening. If there are none left, there can be no union, and the prophecy can be averted. M’kuru, as noted above, manages to survive and escape the massacre, but not without cost, emotionally and otherwise. The problem, and it drives the plot for a good portion of the book, is that the Zenzele know that he survived, and so he lives under a cloud, unable to say who he really is, and alert for the possibility of being found out.

M’kuru finally finds a village and winds up getting shanghaied into a family of an elderly father and his daughter and living as a peasant amongst them. He gets a new identity, as Khalil, the bastard son of the daughter. There is a definite riches to rags feel to this sequence, but the intensification of a rather alarming set of events for a child continues. It’s not just a riches to rags, but a degradation of his existence.

Meanwhile, not doing everything by halves, our primary female protagonist, Zikora, is bundled off to live at the royal palace. This is a two-fold affair -- to keep a potential fulfiller of the prophecy under wraps, and also as a check against her father. Zikora’s father is even more powerful than the Mukundi were, and to do the same to them as they had to the Mukundi will require a little more leverage and preparation, But that is, judging from other points of view we get, entirely the plan of the Zenzele. And so Zikora does go to the palace, as one might go into the lion's den.

The story alternates between these two points of view, although M’kuru/Khalil's point of view gets more play and he is the more active character in some ways. And that is where I think the book misses a trick. With Zikora, inside of the royal palace, we get to see how women, in a rather strongly patriarchal society, can and do wield power and influence and manipulate events as best they can. Queens, concubines, and “guests” like our protagonist all are in a sharp competition for status and influence and these passages were, for me, some of the best in the book. They are a marked difference to M’kuru/Khalil's story and in general, I kept hoping that the story would return to Zikora more frequently than it actually did.

Both M’kuru/Khalil and Zikora grow into their roles as their paths converge toward their first meeting. There is plenty of in-palace plot in the last portion of the book, and while the book does break from our protagonists' points of view to give us information, it is here in this section that those non-protagonist point of views become crucial to the reader to piece together just what is going on.

I was thinking of Forged for Destiny by Andrew Knighton, which I read recently, since that novel deconstructs the whole idea of destiny and fate and a chosen one (or here, what seems to be indicated as the chosen couple). This novel does play it straight and shows how the winds of fate and destiny can be opposed, but never thwarted. I am not as familiar with the underlying cultures that inform and infuse this book. So for me, the Zenzele trying to stop the prophecy that will doom them has a very Greek myth sort of feel. Your child will murder your father and marry your mother, so you expose the baby on the mountainside and thus set the chain of events in motion because your child grew up ignorant of his real family. This novel is in that mold (or at least the portion of the story as far as I can tell).

And so I sit here on the tenterhooks of how I felt about the book overall. It’s well written, and has some rather vivid imagery--but some of that imagery is rather hard to take, especially when it involves children. It’s a rich and interesting world (but again, mind, it's very patriarchal in nature and there is not even a hint of anyone who is queer -- but would children raised in a society like this even know what that is or what it means?). But the genre elements, aside from being in a secondary world, are relatively slight for epic fantasy. There are a few things here and there and there is a setup for Zikora that doesn’t have much payoff in this novel, although it is clearly set for future books. It is mostly a story of prophecy, and politics and the hard road that two children undergo in the stews of both.

As far as the ending, this is the first book in a series and the narrative comes to a stop without any sort of offramp whatsoever. It’s a fraction of a larger book, not a complete story in and of itself. The protagonists have aged into teenage years by the end of the book, and so the threat of violence to children protagonists is unlikely in subsequent volumes. And there is a sense that Bado is trying for a grand sweeping epic that will take years or even longer of the lives of its protagonists to accomplish. I admire the ambition and the drive to try for it. The prophecy is not at risk of being fulfilled in a short while.

There are definitely readers that will enjoy this book and eat it up with a spoon and craving the next book. And I wanted to. But this first volume... did not leave me, alas, wanting more of the epic.

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Highlights:

  • Reread the content warnings. Seriously.

  • Classic fulfillment of a prophecy story.

  • African-themed epic fantasy, immersively so.

  • Only the start of the story.

Reference: Bado, Chinaza, Birth of a Dynasty: A Novel [Harper Voyager, 2025]

POSTED BY: Paul Weimer. Ubiquitous in Shadow, but I’m just this guy, you know? @princejvstin.

Tuesday, May 6, 2025

Realm of the Elderlings Project, The Liveship Traders Book 2: Mad Ship

In which themes are thematic, brilliantly so

Cover art by Stephen Youll

One thing that Mad Ship does NOT do, in any possible way, is suffer from Book-2-itis. Instead, the plot thickens, and thematic resonances start flying thick and fast, in a way that your ninth grade English teacher tried so, so hard to make you recognize in Return of the Native or Hard Times or whatever piece of literature was being mistaught to you. Mr. Teagarten should have picked up some Robin Hobb if he wanted to make us see why recurring ideas and intertwining themes are so brilliant, but perhaps 850-page tomes is a bit of a big ask for a 14-year-old. (That said, I definitely was reading Robin Hobb in 9th grade.) Anyway, because I cannot discuss all 850 pages of this piece of magnificence in anything like justice, I've decided to talk about its recurring ideas and intertwining motifs. Or rather, a subset of them. The three I've selected are far from the only three, but they are the ones that made me stop and (literally!) take notes when they popped up. They are: the need to accept things you cannot change; the plot-thickening dangers of blind rescue; and the concept of personhood.

When last we left our Vestrits and pirates at the end of Ship of Magic, Kyle Haven (ptooey) had turned the liveship Vivacia into a slaver, and Kennit had captured her. In the sea battle that frees the enslaved captives, Kennit gets his leg chomped off by one of the ubiquitous sea serpents who always follow slave ships. (They do this because slave ships are deadly places, after all, the consequences of which deadliness get thrown overboard. Free lunch.)

Wintrow, with his unique position of both having been officially enslaved and also being the requisite family member whose presence is necessary for any liveship to sail, does not share the fate of the sailors who were complicit in the slave trade (i.e., serpent lunch). Instead, Kennit keeps him aboard Vivacia, and a fascinating kind of relationship triangle forms between the three of them. Kennit woos Vivacia with charm and respect and deference, exactly what she never got from Kyle Haven (ptooey), and never had the chance to receive from Althea. But Vivacia is a liveship, and needs to be with her family, and so she continues to reach out to Wintrow, who resents her presence but also feels an obligation to her. In a perfect world, Wintrow would give his allegiance to Kennit, so Vivacia would not feel torn between the two of them. Kennit knows this, and so alongside Vivacia, he also tries to woo Wintrow. In his logical conscious thinking, this wooing makes sense, a way of tying Vivacia more securely to his goals. But underneath that, Kennit sees in Wintrow the boy that he, Kennit, once was, the boy who was taken under the wing of a pirate and grew into the man he is now. For Kennit, that was salvation; and so in Kennit’s mind, he must do the same for Wintrow, as a duty to the boy he once was.

This triangle is one fertile ground to find the first theme: the struggle to accept (or refuse to accept) one’s fate. The point is first articulated by Etta, Kennit’s… lover? She identifies herself as Kennit’s whore, but it’s clear that her devotion and loyalty to him are strong and terrifying in ways that go far beyond sex worker and client. When she sees that Kennit wants Wintrow on his side, while Wintrow struggles to accept it, she takes matters into her hands. You can never return to the monastery, she tells him bluntly. That path is closed to you. You can either accept this life, and make what you can of it, or you can fight it and die pointlessly. One learns such things in a brothel, she says—but she says it without self-pity. She does not see herself as mistreated, though she undoubtedly has been. I do not think she could have developed such a violent loyalty to Kennit if she had known other types of real kindness. However, she has accepted her life, and works within its constraints to find purpose and strength. In her case, that purpose and strength usually leads to murderous protectiveness of Kennit’s interests. In Wintrow’s case, that purpose is to seek out the wisdom and ways of Sa, regardless of his proximity to any monastery.

This same lesson recurs with other characters. Kennit himself, struggling to adapt to life without a leg, must figure out how to be a one-legged pirate. And we see it again towards the end, as word of Vivacia’s capture finally makes it back to Bingtown, and Althea Vestrit and Brashen Trell mount an expedition to go after her. Such an expedition needs a ship, and the only ship is the titular mad ship, Paragon. Paragon is a liveship himself, but he has been beached for decades after a series of catastrophes at sea killed the family who sailed on him, left his face blinded from axe blows that destroyed the wizardwood of his eyes, and destroyed his logbooks—and with them his memories. And now Althea and Brashen and the Fool Amber are refitting him, preparing to sail in him, despite his madness and the risk that he might kill them as he seems to have killed his previous crews. In his moments of lucidity, he had accepted his fate to be a forgotten hulk, but he struggles to accept that he might have a part to play in the world once again.

Paragon also serves as a locus of the second theme: the idea of rescue, and the consequences thereof. We already saw it with Kennit: he rescues enslaved captives and reaps broadly positive consequences: acclaim, reputation, and, eventually, his dearest wish: a liveship of his own. But that liveship is going to be another link in a chain of consequences, because Bingtown will never let a pirate keep a liveship—hence Paragon’s refit, and Althea and Brashen’s mission. In Althea’s eyes, the rescue is aimed at recovering Vivacia (and maybe her nephew Wintrow). In Malta’s eyes, the rescue is for her father Kyle Haven (ptooey). And Malta has a unique opportunity to help, by means of indulging in a bit of rescue of her own. In the course of her magic-infused courtship with Reyn, the son of a prominent Rain Wilds trader family, she has become linked with the voice of a trapped dragon entombed in a buried log of wizardwood. This dragon haunts Malta’s dreams, demanding, threatening, begging for release. So Malta makes a deal: she will rescue the dragon if the dragon rescues her father. The consequences of that will have to wait for the third book.

But wait—a dragon, trapped in wizardwood? How did that happen?

The relationship between dragons and wizardwood brings us to our third theme, the one that I think is the truly brilliant revelation of this book, the discovery that both tarnishes and deepens the sense of wonder of liveships. Thus far, wizardwood has been seen as a rare, magical, magnificent substance that makes liveships into the glorious sentient creatures that they are. But in this book, we learn the whole truth: wizardwood is not mere wood, but instead a cocoon, formed when a sea serpent finishes its larval stage at sea, and returns up the Rain Wild River to hibernate and grow into a dragon. Historically the serpents were shepherded in this migration by the living dragons who guide them, and watched over in their transformation by the now-disappeared Elderlings who lived symbiotically with them. But centuries ago, the Elderling city by the dragons’ hibernation spot was buried in an earthquake, and the cocoons were blocked from the sun, unable to hatch. This is why dragons disappeared from the land; this is why they had to be built with Skill and sacrifice in the Farseer trilogy. The living dragons gradually died, and their successors were buried during the disaster, unable to hatch. For every liveship constructed from wizardwood, one of those cocoons was cut open, and the embryo dragon inside tossed away like trash. The magic and sentience that makes liveships what they are is in fact nothing more than the ghostly remnants of a dead dragon’s memories that the wizardwood absorbed from them. Liveships are dead before they ever quicken; and in their construction, an entire race of creatures was destroyed.

Can you imagine learning such a thing about yourself? To imagine yourself a living, thinking, sentient magical being, a liveship, who has a family, and memories, and agency in the world—only to learn that your entire existence is the consequence of a horrific genocide? That your ability to move and speak, to form memories, is not true life, but instead a simulacrum, a husk, a shell, an existence stolen from another being? Are you even a real person?

What does it mean, then, to be a person? In a way, this question has a kind of resonance with a lot of science fiction stories about the personhood of AI. In the framing of one of those tales—let's say, arbitrarily, Star Trek: The Next Generation’s “Measure of a Man”—a liveship’s identity, personality, agency, and sentience would unquestionably endow it with personhood. But what those stories lack is the horrifying cost of the liveships’ creation. To waken one, four lives must be given: the dragon, and then the three generations of family members whose deaths are needed to quicken the ship. Traditionally, those last three lives are given willingly, lovingly—but they don’t have to be. Paragon’s quickening happened prematurely, during the mysterious violent death that killed his crew and the last two generations of his family. In principle, a liveship could be wakened by taking a grandparent, parent, and child aboard and slitting their throats. Four people (including the dragon) must die to create this artificial person. Does that matter in determining personhood?

To the liveships it does. Or it can. Because under the right circumstances, they can gain direct access to the memories of the dead dragon whose husk was used to build them. When this happens, they realize—or perhaps decide?—that they are dead, that their lives as ships, as the person they had been, are false, a dishonor to the memory of what they might have been. They renounce their identity built from their liveship existence, but have nothing to replace it with other than the knowledge that their intended life as a dragon has been stolen from them. It is like a kind of madness, or a return to sanity. Or a shattering of delusions that is worse than madness. One finds oneself wondering if such a revelation is responsible for Paragon’s current state.

These three themes (acceptance, rescue, and personhood) wind together as sinuously as any sea serpent. Memory builds the personhood that defines the liveships, built from the bodies of dead dragons; but it also defines the sea serpents that follow behind the liveships, feasting on the bodies of dead humans—and, at times, the wizardwood of liveships too. Because the serpents’ memories are faulty. They have no adult dragons to guide them back to their nesting places, and so they stagnate, withering, losing themselves, forgetting their names. They cease to be people, and become instead beasts. Then toward the end, Wintrow comes across a trapped sea serpent, one which carries the memories that are necessary to keep the other serpents aware long enough for them to find their way back to the Rain Wild River. Being Wintrow, he naturally frees the trapped serpent (rescue again!), thus making it possible for these lost creatures to find a guide and make their way home before their identities are lost forever.

And finally, while I’m talking about what this book does so well, let me take a moment to discuss Malta. Remember Malta? The unspeakable brat? She begins her transformation in this book. The pivotal moment, as I see it, is on page 319, when she sneaks out to meet a suitor, the brother of one of her friends, named Cerwin. Certainly she goes about it in a very Malta-ish way. She flirted with Cerwin, and in her head she knows exactly how she wants Cerwin to behave. She wants him to be big and manly and passionate with her, to see her as a mistreated maiden sacrifice who must marry for the sake of her family’s welfare, while simultaneously calculating every facial expression, every gesture, every apparently unconscious movement. She presents herself as someone who needs rescuing, (rescue!), and presents an identity built upon lies (personhood!). Yet when Cerwin falls for her manipulations and asks how he can serve her, she does not ask for something selfish. She is smart: she asks him to persuade his father to come to a Bingtown Council Meeting to support her family’s agenda about slave trading and pirates. This is the moment when Malta stops thinking of herself, stops wallowing in frustration about what she cannot have. Instead, she accepts (accepts!) the hand that she is dealt and puts to use her wiles and manipulations and skills at bending people to her will.

Do you see? Do you see how it all intersects? And I’ve left so much out! And Book 3 has so much more! The more I write about this series, the more I am agog at this astonishing tapestry Hobb has woven. I’ll see you next month to talk about Book 3, Ship of Destiny.


Reference: Hobb, Robin. Mad Ship [Bantam, 1999].


CLARA COHEN lives in Scotland in a creaky old building with pipes for gas lighting still lurking under her floorboards. She is an experimental linguist by profession, and calligrapher and Islamic geometric artist by vocation. During figure skating season she does blather on a bit about figure skating. She is on Mastodon at wandering.shop/@ergative, and on Bluesky at https://bsky.app/profile/ergative-abs.bsky.social

Wednesday, April 9, 2025

Book Review: Of Ash and Salt by Daniel McGee

An intriguing secondary fantasy world that capably hits many of the expected notes of epic fantasy

Sometimes, only a proper multi-POV epic fantasy in the classic style (or seemingly so) will do. There is something that still gets me, decades into reading epic fantasy, about starting a brand new world, delving into new lore, a new map, new characters, and a new tangled skein. And to see what is new, fresh and different this time. So for me reading epic fantasy is a combination of comfort reading (something sorely needed in these times) and the hope for innovation and the unexpected at the same time.

So we come to Of Ash and Salt by Daniel McGee. I’m going to look at it through an interrogation of the framework of epic fantasy and how his work matches it and how well it executes it.

What makes an epic fantasy, well, epic fantasy?

There are Wikipedia definitions, the tradition of epic poetry, the sense of stakes (which I wrote a well-regarded article about for SF Signal once upon a time). My own conception of it has evolved from my reading of the genre, reading of criticism of the genre, and my own biases, perceptions, and expectations. There is no one correct definition of epic fantasy, but there are definitely expected elements that overlap in most people’s minds.¹ But this list below are the ones I focus on for an epic fantasy:

Secondary world locale, widescreen

Epic fantasy takes place on a big stage in a secondary world. Most epic fantasies, unless they are being transgressive or subversive, will thus have a prominent map in the front of the book. Diana Wynn Jones taught us the importance of such a map in The Tough Guide to Fantasyland. A significant portion of the map will be covered in journeys and adventures in the course of the narrative.

How does Of Ash and Salt measure up? It’s got a map in the front helpfully entitled “Aminara, the Land of Origins” in a parchment-like style. We have scenes that start in the far north of the map, Hein’s Crossing, as well as the capital city of Crownhold, and plenty of places in between. One of the main POV characters, Aiden, makes the journey from one to the other, having numerous adventures in the process. Eila, the other major POV, stays in Crownhold entirely. We get to visit a fair amount of that map, and see a variety of types of locations, from the frozen north to the desert to dense urban districts.

Stakes and scale

Epic fantasy should have the fate of a nation, at the very least, if not the fate of even larger polities and considerations at stake. I’ve described the scale of stakes going from personal, through city-state, kingdom, and finally epic. A novel, no matter how written, deciding the fate of an alley in the capital is not epic. The fate of a single city often is not (although if it is, say that selfsame capital, the stakes can approach epic by implication if not explicitly). When we start getting the fate of kingdoms and the political future of continents, we’re in epic territory. And if you throw in gods and extraplanar powers, you are in epic fantasy for certain. But those stakes can as often be set large at the beginning as set small and then snowball and reveal wider concerns. The farm girl who becomes a paladin hero to an entire kingdom is a classic form of this.

Thus, for Of Ash and Salt, what starts off as Aiden concerned about his wounded father, and Eila concerned that her best friend might have his automatic-conscription secret magical talent be discovered, fulminates in both directions into stakes involving the fate of the kingdom, and more than just the kingdoms as well. There are machinations, a rebellion, multiple polities and a lot going on across the landscape. The conflict and stakes that our protagonists encounter feel much larger than just their story alone.

Deep time

In keeping with stakes and scale, epic fantasies know how to leverage deep time to their best advantage. A new fight between rising city-states is barely on the edge of epic fantasy. A boiling struggle between two nations that have a backstory of having been in conflict for a century? Or, say, the burned-out embers of an empire three hundred years dead roaring back to life? Now we’re getting into epic fantasy territory. And if you have, say, machinations and conflicts of elder races going back thousands of years, or even gods and goddesses, you are well and deep into epic fantasy now. The narrative weight of deep time magnifies and increases the scale of the conflict.

Of Ash and Salt gives us plenty of deep time aspects to the conflict. We get hints of lost, fallen technology powered by a now depleted and inaccessible resource, Firesalt. We have a wizard, Ledarein, who is clearly much more than the conjurer of cheap tricks that he seems at the beginning of the book, especially when we meet his enemy and adversary, Sadrel Kirn. Sadrel has dark plans of his own and is far less subtle about his magic. We even get an inconclusive magical duel between the pair at one point in the book. These two have a long, long history.

And then there are two powerful weapons, the Itille and the Darsaad. We get a look at the latter first, for its arrival causes consternation, and plotting, in the capital city of Crownhold. Where it is and what its counterpart, the Itille, can do, are teased out over a longer period. But they are clearly artifacts of an older age, with a deep history and power that informs and impacts the present.

Magic

The mention of the magical weapons brings to me another necessary element to epic fantasy and that is magic. I suppose that an epic fantasy could be written without it, in theory, but a completely mundane fantasy without even a hint of magic in it is rare. Even A Song of Ice and Fire, which is probably much lower on the overt magic scale than a lot of epic fantasy in the first volume, still has *some*, and magic clearly is seen to exist in Westeros and beyond. But in general, magic is usually more than that in epic fantasy. Magic helps with the deep time, the sense of scale, and the widescreen fantasy world.

So what does Of Ash and Salt have? As mentioned above, we start with Ledarein, who looks at best a hedge wizard, but we also are introduced to the Darsaad right away. We get the aforementioned magic duel, the mention of Firesalt, and other feats of magic and possibly lost technomagic as well. Magic doesn’t overwhelm the narrative, heroism, or the action of the characters, but it is an essential part of the fantasy world.

A big cast of characters

Epic fantasy, in my view, should have a wide range of characters for us to interact with, meet, and preferably follow. There has been a tendency lately in epic fantasy to really narrow down and screw down the number of POVs we get in a book. In the logical distillation of this trend in some cases, you get a single POV for the entire narrative. In some ways, that can make things even harder on a writer than a reader—how do you convey the sweeping scope of the world and the conflicts if it is limited to one porthole, one perspective? It’s epically difficult to pull off. I am more commonly seeing 2 or 3 narrators, and far less often the Martin or Jordan approach. POVs also often need narrative momentum to really take off, and too many can mean that getting invested in the characters is harder.

But beyond just POVs is the fact that an epic fantasy should feel populated, and dare I say, diversely populated. If you are in fact going to go epic, having all your major characters be clones of each other from the same locale does a disservice to the writer, their world, and the reader. So having a variety of characters along various axes, even if they aren’t narrators, helps give the world depth and scale.

So our primary POV characters are the aforementioned Aiden, son of the leading man of a northern village, and Eila, an orphan in the big city of Crownhold. We’ve got the magicians, street gang members, Ildara, the exiled princess turned warrior, scheming nobles, senators, kindly grandmothers, merchant, nomadic clans and a whole lot more. The world feels lived-in, inhabited, and full of people to meet. The author does a great job in distinguishing and differentiating his wide cast, and not just Aiden and Eila, but the others come to life as well. I could have wished for, old-fashioned that I am, for a Dramatis Personae.

Themes

Novels are never just a pile of events and characters, but this is especially true of epic fantasy. This is where the bones and DNA of Tolkien as ur-epic fantasy come to the fore. Tolkien plays with strong themes and it is those themes that elevate Tolkien in many respects to being the work of literature that it is. Good and Evil, Honor and Duty. Sacrifice. Honor. Loyalty. When to take a stand. When to resist.

Duty, honor, responsibility, the tug of conflicting needs and demands, loyalty, and doing what is right fill the book. Throughout, our protagonists are faced with dilemmas, questions and internal and external conflicts. Novels have to drive on conflict, and not just external ones. Time and again, Aiden is pained by the need and desire to help his father, and Eila pushed and driven by the need and desire to save her friend from a dread fate. This is the meat and drink of well written epic fantasy and the author brings it to the table effectively.

Immersion

Finally, for a true epic fantasy for me, I need all these elements to come together and to immerse me. Put me, the reader, fully into your world. You can worldbuild by lore, by explication, by quoting texts and in-world histories and resources. If you are that kind of book, you can use footnotes if you want. But put me into the world, with your writing, and make me meet your characters, bring all the elements together and truly bring to life a fantasy world, epic saga, a tale of characters, conflicts and more. If I miss my subway stop, then I know I have a true epic fantasy on my hands.

On those metrics, Of Ash and Salt succeeds capably. I was immediately hooked into our two main POV characters, and the switch back and forth was well executed and kept me turning pages to see what was happening to Aiden, and to wonder what Eila was up to now given the latest chapter, and then back again. With the successful widescreen approach of Aiden having the cross-country adventure to give us a smörgåsbord of locations, people, and situations, and to have Eila make us really feel her small section of Crownhold (the walled-off district of the Evergreens is a clever and interesting invention, making me think of a number of historical inspirations from our own history). The mystery and magic of the magicians, the secrets of the two weapons, Firesalt and more helped bring the sense of wonder to the page.

Finally, Of Ash and Salt is the first in a series. Although as stunts, you can have epic fantasies in as little as one volume,² generally epic fantasies are at least duologies, sometimes trilogies, and in some cases longer still. Epic fantasies, in order to do all the things listed above, need pages and space to grow and fill the reader with everything they have to offer. Thus, this book has an ending, but really the story has just begun for the characters. In a traditional and classic and welcome fashion, the novel has an epilogue that suggests the scope and scale of the conflict is larger than previously suspected or known. That, too, is part and parcel of the epic fantasy tradition, and Of Ash and Salt takes its place nicely within it. I look forward to more books in the Emorean Prophecy.

Highlights:

  • Epic fantasy beats along the old straight track, well executed
  • Engaging and deep themes
  • #TeamIldara

Reference:

McGee, Daniel. Of Ash and Salt [Ruby Cave Publishing, 2025].


¹ Complete sidebar here, for Americans: What states do you consider to be in the Midwest? The maps of what people consider to be the midwest are fascinating. Iowa is clearly in the midwest for any conception of it by nearly everyone, but you get real interesting cases as you move away from it. So it is too with elements of epic fantasy. So consider all I have to say in that light.


² I am aware of all internet traditions, and also that The Lord of the Rings was written as one book and was split into three.


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