Tuesday, April 29, 2025

Book Review: The Incandescent by Emily Tesh

 A very British, very brutal take on dark academia that takes it back to its more critical roots.

Caveat: this review was written in October 2024, and I believe before the final editing pass. I doubt it will make an actual difference to anything, but just in case.

So… dark academia. Where to start with it? At the beginning, I suppose.

I haven’t read Donna Tartt’s The Secret History in a good number of years now, but I remember loving it. It’s dark in the truest sense, complex, vicious and incredibly cutting about institutions, class, power and hierarchy. This is dark academia as a tool for critiquing the setting, although, as with all satire, there were inevitably people who missed the point, even when it came out.

Cards on the table – I went to the University of Cambridge, where I studied classics. My background was not wealthy, though I had some advantages that helped me on the route to university, but there was enough in the perspective of The Secret History’s protagonist that felt real and personal to me, that I was always either going to love or loathe it. For all that my university experience was pretty positive, there was enough in what I saw that connected to what Tartt discusses, what she critiques, that the book made a special little place in my heart right from the off. If this is where dark academia had stayed, this thoughtful place that understood and heavily satirised the trappings of power, privilege and education, and what they mean for the lives of the people in the system, what they mean for aspirations, and how class is so deeply interwoven through all of it, it would have been a damn good subgenre.

Alas, much of modern dark academia feels more about style than substance – it’s the allure of the tweed jacket and the terrible teens swapping Shakespeare quotes because they’re just better than everyone else, and the feeling of being part of that crowd because you, the reader, by dint of reading this sort of book, are also better than everyone else, and part of this special intellectual club. The extent to which the point is being missed is frankly astounding.

The new novel from Emily Tesh, The Incandescent, is also billed as dark academia in much of the marketing, but where many of the more recent entries have strayed from its origins, here, Tesh has dug both hands deep into the thorniest parts of what Tartt was getting at and yanked. The Secret History is a fundamentally American story, and this… this is a deeply, deeply English one. It is so utterly suffused with English notions of class, education, history and legacy, I almost wonder how some of it made it through the US editors. This is a story that includes a specific song sung at the University of Cambridge about how we’d rather go to Oxford, our longstanding historical nemesis, than one of the colleges of Cambridge, St. John’s*. Why John’s is loathed is a matter long lost in the annals of history, but knowing the song is one of the many shibboleths of Oxbridge culture, another way of saying “here I am, I know the secret knowledge, I am one of us”. Wait… I swear we were just talking about exactly that…

Set in a posh English boarding school that offers, among the usual curriculum, lessons in the three modern branches of magic, The Incandescent follows the long-suffering Dr. Walden, director of magic, deputy head, and person responsible for much of the smooth running of the school. Walden, alumna of the school, Oxford graduate, PhD and one of the best magicians of her age, is a complex figure with her roots deep into the various education systems of England and beyond. She’s well placed to charm and soothe the wealthy parents of her privileged pupils, as well as to advocate for those few whose places at the school are charity rather than spending, those whose magic is so strong they have to be somewhere where they can be trained into safety.

Already, we have a point of difference – where many of the novels in dark academia follow the young, teenagers, university students, Walden is 37, jaded and somewhat tired. She looks on her young charges with a great deal of fondness, but also a healthy dose of exasperation – she does not take teenagehood and its tribulations as seriously as teens do, because she’s been there, done that, and seen a number of years of them come up under her tuition. This is academia with an already weathered eye, an awareness that none of it is truly that special, all things come around again and again.

Particularly, what comes around again here is a longstanding threat to the school from a demon that lives just on the other side of the borderline of reality, known affectionately as Old Faithful. Incursions have happened throughout the years, with disastrous consequences, and things seem poised for another one under Walden’s watchful gazy. That alone might be the story of some novels – a looming threat, a skilled guardian with the right companions, putting down the big bad once and for all. But Tesh takes it in a rather different direction – the enemy here is a subtler one, and the true problems the characters face do not fully realise until much later on.

If you’ve read Some Desperate Glory, her Hugo winning novel, you’ll know Tesh isn’t averse to changing the rules of the game late on. The effect here is rather subtler, but has some markings of the same hand at work in it – we learn enough about the system, the parameters of the story to start to feel comfortable, and then we learn that actually, we’ve been focussing on the wrong things entirely. Time to pivot and reassess our view, and re-examine the knowledge the book has given us.

That moment, that pivot, is key to the success of both books. Though they focus on rather different issues at play, both are stories that want the reader to really interrogate the systems at work in their worlds, and do so by forcing them out of complacency. They let you think you know what this is, that you know the rules, and then boom, no you don’t. In that moment of uncertainty, you have to think about what the story’s doing. You are forced to do the work, and to look under the rug at what might be lurking, unexamined.

The answer, in The Incadescent, is a complex cocktail of privilege and class, a dash of very British racism, and the long, rotten tail of tradition and legacy that seems like an unavoidable mould upon educational institutions. It’s there right from the start, but it’s only once the story lurches that you truly confront it in all its nastiness.

And, following on from that, I felt likewise drawn into an interrogation of both the dark academia novel and its longstanding cousin, the school story. Before Harry Potter seized the cultural attention, there were plenty of others, including plenty of magical ones – I have fond memories of watching The Worst Witch, and though I never read the books, there were many who did. They too are full of children who are in some way Special. Sometimes they are special because of their magic, but many of them are also from longstanding families, wealthy, with societal cache and legacies running deep into the past, alumnae of the institutions that the current crop of children attend. Draco Malfoy and Ron Weasley were not innovations, and owe their debts to many a character before them.

It is easy, especially as a child, not to look too closely at this idea of specialness, of this small, select, often secret group of people, being taught things normal people aren’t allowed to or cannot know. The idea that they’re better always floats just below the surface.

Tesh confronts that. The story examines the rot in the system, while acknowledging the good – there’s always something good or wanted in there, at least for someone, else the system never would have ended up perpetuated – and forcing the reader to confront all the nasty foundations upon which these stories are built. Here, the privilege is obvious – that this is a posh boarding school, with all the attendant issues, is front and centre, returned to again and again. You cannot forget it, nor can you forget the position that puts some of the students in.

On the one hand, you have a ward of the school, a magical prodigy, whose talents likely caused the death of her parents at a young age. Black, not well-off and alone in the world. The school, the lessons to help her control the magic that brought her to the attention of the authorities, are her world, but she is a step apart from so many of her fellows. She knows this – it’s acknowledged in conversations with Walden, her hesitance about her place in the world going forwards.

And then in contrast, a legacy boy. He has talent, yes, but also charm, and both make him lazy. He is someone for whom the world lines itself up nicely, smooths the path, whether because of money, connections, or simply the confidence of coming from that sort of background. Critically, his charm is palpable to the reader. Walden doesn’t hate him – though she acknowledges as an adult she might find him insufferable (we’ll come back to this in a moment) – and I found I never could. He genuinely is charming, as many people in his sort of situation are. The contrast between these two, as well as their interplay with their teachers, the school,  and their classmates is a well balanced look at how education systems perpetuate the existing inequalities of English society, locking into place the old class and money hierarchies that stretch back deep into history.

I say English, not British, because I think a lot of what this book does is rooted in a particularly English sort of superiority complex. Which isn’t to say equivalents or similar versions aren’t available across the UK, but just that the one this particularly focuses on is a particularly subset of the type.

But it’s not all about the kids. Because we have Walden as our main viewpoint character, we have access to a world within the school outside of the sphere of interest and influence of the children. This is a book about teaching, about the various structures around keeping a school of this sort going, as much as it is about all the rest. But it also means we have access to adult relationships. While not dispassionate ones, there’s something so much more alluring about the interpersonal stuff – romantic and otherwise – of a 37 year old than the high drama ones more likely in books with teenage protagonists. 37 year olds just do relationships differently to teens. The priorities, the focus, the modes of interaction are just a whole other thing.

This, too, is something the book does fantastically. We see Walden interacting with various members of staff – we get her friendships, her rivalries, her flirtations, and indeed her romances. We see her as a whole, rounded person, someone who had a life before the story began, with people in it. Where teens can feel a fresh slate, ready to make the relationships that will kickstart them into the world, Walden is someone with failures behind her, someone who has loved, lost and learned. It makes her jaded, but it also makes her so, so interesting to read, and so very human.

She also has relatably tragic taste in men (and very acceptable taste in women).

Good bi rep in a non-romance book is a rare and wondrous thing. Good bi rep that acknowledges compulsory heterosexuality and that bi women can be totally ok with being attracted to men, and not just diet lesbians with bad habits? Chef’s kiss.

Because, coming back to the charming boy – there is an adult version of him in the story. He is bad news. Walden knows he’s terrible. But he is, also… well, he’s charming. He’s charming in a way that is so palpable on the page. I got it. I didn’t blame her. And while this is great for bi rep in general, it swings us right back to those points about privilege and power and charm. This is what the adult product of that upbringing looks like. He moves so easily through the world, and some of us even like him, while knowing what he is, where he’s come from.

Dark academia works because there is an undeniable allure to some of what those broken systems create. Not for everyone, of course. Some people will inevitably see right through the charming man and send him on his way. But some people will… I don’t want to say “fall for it”, because you can do it with eyes open too. You can see the smiling face of all that corruption and kiss it anyway, knowing what’s underneath, because it is a good smile, and it is a remarkably good kisser and well… it’s just a kiss, it doesn’t mean anything, it’s only… it’s just…

And so the system has you too.

Tesh’s characters here are never just characters. They are so totally embedded in their places in the world, that every interaction is laden down with meaning. The hot man is never just a cigar.

When I stop to think about this book, I inevitably circle back, again and again, to class. People joke that British people see the whole world through its lens, and at least speaking for myself, I cannot deny it. And as an SFF reader in the current environment, where so much is dominated by US-authored stories, it’s not something I see in fiction as much or in the same way as I experience it in the world around me. It makes me hungry for stories that acknowledge this scaffolding that sits around a large part of my worldview. It sometimes exasperates me when stories don’t recognise it, especially stories set in the UK, or places that feel like the UK, or when they fail to convey its nuances. It isn’t the only lens – gender, race and sexuality too have their parts to play – but to cut it out of the story fails to capture the world. So when we come to a genre like dark academia, one so steeped in all the trappings that for me, an English person, are laced with class markers… to have it missing? That’s half the story untold.

Tesh does not leave that half untold. It is there, written large, in every word on every page. This is a story that understands how class is the underpinning, the bedrock, upon which these sorts of institutions thrive and survive. Money is important, but class is everything. Even the people who think they know better cannot escape it.

And it is precisely that awareness, and the very evident flawed immersion in exactly that environment, that makes the protagonist and the story work so, so well. If The Incandescent is dark academia, it is an entry into the genre that knows its roots, and chooses to take that original sense of knowing critique, of the view of the rot that you can only get from right in the very innards of the beast. It acknowledges the allure, the good, the draws – Walden, whatever else she is, is a dedicated, passionate educator committed to her students and the subject she teaches them, and one who loves the place she first came to her passion – it understands why we would kiss the charming man. But it tells us, in the end, that the rot is there under the smile, and that it cannot be ignored.

* Sung to the tune of “She’ll be Coming Round the Mountain”, it runs thus:

“Oh I’d rather be at Oxford than St. John’s.
Oh I’d rather be at Oxford than St. John’s.
Oh I’d rather be at Oxford, rather be at Oxford, rather be at Oxford than St. John’s”.
Truly, an artwork for the ages.

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The Math

Highlights: a very British criticism of class, dark academia with teeth and claws intact, top tier bi rep

Nerd Coefficient: 9/10

Reference: Emily Tesh, The Incandescent, [Tordotcom, 2025].

POSTED BY: Roseanna Pendlebury, the humble servant of a very loud cat. @chloroformtea.bsky.social